Still: guitar. starburst body

[sumpm1]

looks really good, no criticism here

[LordShaitan]

Looks nice. Maybe the body of it is a little bit to reflective. The spot where the input and the body meets looks to ubrupt and strange looking.

Maybe the knob for the sholder strap is a little to shiny. Other then that it lokos great.

Nice job

[neo_virus]

That looks cool, altho the AA seems a bit of towards the bottom, other than that looing good :beer:
Is there anychance you could post your parameters for the sunburst body, as im modeliing my Bass which has that colour body?

[qu2k]

what do you mean parameters? the model? or the texture?

[neo_virus]

Basically what are the settings for the material you applied to the body?
Also what program did you use?

[qu2k]

i used max 5,

basically its a fresnel falloff in the reflection slot

not much to it

[neo_virus]

hmmi still cant get it too look right :hmm: What if you turn it into a mat file and attach it?

[HapZungLam]

Alright, It is nearly perfect to me. I love your guitor

But if you want me to go picky, there has some areas that you can concentrade

the green area that i circle. you may want to put more subdiv lvl there, I can see the polygon breakup.

the red area, this is the hardset part. Basically, your White surface and the wooden texture part looks detach. The reasons could be because your have high reflections on the wooden surface. but not the white surface.

You can tune it up a little bit for the white part. Or you if you don't want to have reflections, maybe you want to try tune up the specular highlights.

2nd, it might because there has no shadow there. Well, i know that you are rendered using GI. but something if the computer didn't work out for you, you can always touch up using textures.

You can add another burned laryer on the wood part surround the white edges. Which means, create a textured shadow for it. Don't make it obvious. Just a little feeling notice is just about fine.

Hope it helps. Overall, :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Entangle]

imo, the body is off on the far side. Its more of a curve, and yours look sorta flatish :\ you know?

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