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Shadytree408
12-26-2005, 08:32 AM
I decided to start another thread of this same WIP... because my last one didn't get any responses because probably the lousy title. Any suggestions on the buildings? or the car? or my perspective?

Heres the WIP... Comments, Crits, Suggestions... are all welcomed.
http://www.kmartsdesign.com/sketches/kiss11a.jpg

Started from something that I completed... but didn't feel finished without something more or a background.

http://www.kmartsdesign.com/kiss/normal.jpg

boeserWolf
12-26-2005, 09:12 AM
hm ... so i would place the girls more to the front and took the car out ... something with the size of the car and the perspective dont seems to work right ( imo ) ...

... other than that a great painting ... hope you get this time more replys, but dont wory geting less replys is normal here :lol: ;) ( the amount of replys dont say much about the quality of your works ;) )

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