CGTalk - SHEILL/ sport car

gato

11-26-2002, 08:13 AM

Hi all...this is my second car made in XSI. All Subdividsion surfaces and HDRI with Final Gathering. Just wanto some comments and look-ups :surprised from you to still improve :D .
Its a prototype, design as I model it.
Thanks for your time and have a nice day...

gato

11-26-2002, 08:15 AM

Soooory. can´t attach any image...

Another try...

gato

11-26-2002, 08:16 AM

Soooory. can´t attach any image...

Another try...

gato

11-26-2002, 08:25 AM

another view...

Sorry for the mess...

CarlCampbell

11-26-2002, 10:35 AM

Está chulo, tío, pero creo que tendrías que poner mas contraste y brillo en el mapa HDRI, es que las partes del coche no quedan muy bien definidas... una mejor iluminación estaría guay también...

Carl :beer:

Ian Jones

11-26-2002, 10:37 AM

looks pretty cool from what I can see of it.

A prototype needs to sell itself. It really needs to sell itself to a potential producer. This means that we actually need to be able to see the car. Part of designing and rendering this is for the specific purpose that it needs to impress a potential buyer, be instantly recognisable and its form understood clearly. I think you need to re-think the compositions, texturing and lighting in order to enhance the form of the car (for example placing highlights that reveal the form clearly). I am getting eye-strain trying to see this, granted... it may well be a gamma difference between our monitors, but I think you could still improve the render anyway.

Hope that helps.

gato

11-26-2002, 10:56 AM

words full of knowledge...thanks Ian, Carl ( un afectuoso saludo, no se ven a muchos espanyoles por aqui. Me ha gustado tu plataforma de lanzamiento, sobre todo la composicion...)...
Ill fix the render parameters to get an equilibrate composite to show the topology properly...and improve my render skills...

:D

Thanks you two and have a nice day...:thumbsup:

CarlCampbell

11-26-2002, 11:56 AM

De nada hombre! Para eso existe este foro! Me alegro de que te guste mi plataforma!

Anyways, I think the MAIN problem is that the floor should be white!, you know, like in the "concesionarios" where the floor has nice reflections and is brightly lit, that'd make the car stand out against it :thumbsup:

Por cierto, diseño original? O ya existe?

Carl :beer:

gato

11-26-2002, 12:05 PM

:thumbsup:

I will try the "concesionario" look. Ill update as soon as I can.

El diseño es original, va saliendo todo a medida que lo modelo( es una forma extraña de trabajar, pero los resultados son frescos_a veces...)

original concept.

:beer:

JuRrAsStOiL

11-26-2002, 01:42 PM

I like it somehow, kill the reflecting ground plane :)

reminds me of the El Nino from Need for speed 3 :D

CarlCampbell

11-26-2002, 02:12 PM

Por cierto, una cosa que se me ha olvidado preguntar... que software usas?

Carl :beer:

gato

11-26-2002, 02:21 PM

SOFTIMAGE XSI

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Michael Chen

11-26-2002, 11:33 PM

Nice sports car. I like the overall model.

But I think you could work a bit more on the texture.

:buttrock:

ToddD

11-27-2002, 01:07 AM

I completely agree with Ian Jones, a better render and lighting would really make this a great piece.

sumpm1

11-27-2002, 04:26 AM

Thats a pretty cool design. you should enter the XSI Base November contest.The current contest is for modelling a car.

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