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TobyArt

12-21-2005, 12:35 AM

This was done in acrylic not photoshop, but I thought you all would be the best source for critique for painting. I just started painting again after 13 years and wanted some feedback on how I can make this xmas present better. Any feedback would be great

http://home.comcast.net/%7Ezyrinx99/paintings/snowmanthumb.jpg

The high res is here http://home.comcast.net/%7Ezyrinx99/paintings/snowman.jpg

Thanks,

zng-Y

12-21-2005, 08:04 AM

Hey not bad at all! Did he just eat his friend? :scream:
I would use a little less (or none) outlines. And what's behind the mountains? :D
A little more work on the smoke and you're done :bounce:

TobyArt

12-21-2005, 09:17 PM

Thanks for the input, I'll do less(or no) outlines on my next one, but I'll work on the smoke right away. And there are no mountains so I'll change the cloud behind the house to make it look more like a cloud and less like a mountain.

andreashusballe

12-21-2005, 09:47 PM

Tjeck the horizon line! The perspective of the house is surgesting that the horizon line is suppose to be in the middel of the air... nice to see some none computer work :)

TobyArt

12-22-2005, 03:32 AM

good call, I may have to turn that cloud into a mountain to fix that one

Thanks!

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