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Rysh
12-19-2005, 02:58 PM
hi everyone!
this is a sketch of a cat's dream that I want to do in 3dsmax,
I drawed it about 5 houres
Your comments will be useful for me!

:scream:Thanks-Rysh


http://taxistudio.net/rysh/cats-dream_2.jpg
http://taxistudio.net/rysh/cats-dream.jpg

arielmedel
12-19-2005, 04:57 PM
Hi, I like the colors and the drawing seems cute. I have some comments though, I think the cat seems a little too much to the bottom, it doesnīt attract much attention right now. Also, you may want to add more trees or something in the back near the house, you have a lot of grass on the front but nothing on the background. The purple looks nice but it doesnīt look in place, thereīsīnothing I see that indicates there should be a purple there. I recommend looking at a reference picture where you can see how the moon reflects light. Anyway, itīs a good start and it seems you really cna improve your piece. :)

Rysh
12-20-2005, 05:29 AM
thanks for your guidance friend!
I want to draw a tomato farm near the house(on the right side)!
because I think the scene needes some red color,also I shoud add moon reflect as you told!

good luck

authentic
12-20-2005, 10:32 AM
I really like the layout and the composition.
Maybe put the cat on a post or something like.

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