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arielmedel
12-17-2005, 05:52 PM
Here's a sketch I plan to paint. Initially I wanted to use a caucassian girl, but I didn't find pics that were good enough or big enough, I run into this girl wchich is more latin like. And since I'm Mexican, well I made the sketch.

If anyone has comments let me know. I plan to get a grip of painting digitally a little more, make a couple of images like this, and then go for a more elaborate piece with more elements and better composition.

http://amedeldesign.com/chava.jpg

Euphrosyne
12-17-2005, 09:48 PM
You have a good start here. The eye nearest the viewer might be tilted up a little to much on the outer corner. I really like the mouth. Keep painting!

arielmedel
12-18-2005, 06:19 AM
Thanks for your comment Euphrosyne. Ill keep it in mind and work on that.

How about this everybody. Its still very rough but its taking shape.

http://amedeldesign.com/sketch2.jpg

All comments are welcome. Thanks.

arielmedel
12-19-2005, 04:23 AM
Hey, heres another post, Id really like to know the opinion of as many people as possible, I see many read the thread but few answer, come on let me know your opinion
:)

http://amedeldesign.com/chava2.jpg

Euphrosyne, you had comse comments about the eyes, how do you think I could fix it? Maybe making the eye closer to the viewer a bit smaller?

arielmedel
12-19-2005, 09:40 AM
Heres another update, it still needs a lot of work though. Please comments anyone?
Geez, what does a guy need to do to get some critique around here. lol :p


http://amedeldesign.com/chava3.jpg

arielmedel
12-20-2005, 06:47 AM
while I upload another update for the image in this thread, let me share with you a drawing I made for comic strip I do, this is all watercolors and pencil.

http://amedeldesign.com/salvador.jpg

Let me know if you like it. :thumbsup:

se7enthcin
12-20-2005, 07:22 AM
nice, keep it up. :thumbsup:

beelow
12-20-2005, 09:07 AM
Move the bottom of the chin up a little, and back a little, not to much though, that should help.

As far as the eyes, bring the top of the eyelid down a little.

Try to recongnize shapes, which will help with getting stuff pretty accurate, and will also speed up the process, paint loose, the cut in with detail, Go to Nebezial's thread in the anatomy forum he offers great tips there!

Good luck with your painting!:)

Xerilon
12-20-2005, 02:44 PM
The first posted sketch there look alot like the norwegian artist Mira craig!

http://sandra.mobilblogg.no/images/dsc00278_084057359.JPG

arielmedel
12-20-2005, 05:15 PM
Yes, she does look a bit like her :)

More updates soon...

arielmedel
12-20-2005, 11:17 PM
I fixed the chin like beelow suggested. Ill work on the eyes too. Also I worked some more on the lips. Im working on this piece from in between the work I have to do.

Heres the link, Ill appreciatte more comments. thanks.

http://amedeldesign.com/chava4.jpg

arielmedel
12-21-2005, 01:53 AM
Heres just a quick sketch while I make more changes the my painitng.

http://amedeldesign.com/SKETCHX.JPG

I hope you like it.

beelow
12-21-2005, 09:44 AM
The chin is starting, to look better, now, just keep working it. Here is some stuff that you can experiment with, some of lynda's tuts. They are really helpful, good luck. will check back later!:thumbsup:
http://www.furiae.com/index.php?view=gallery

arielmedel
12-22-2005, 08:51 PM
Ill be out of the forums for about two weeks because of the holidays and all, Ill finish this thread image then, please check back next year. Thanks for all the comments so far, and have a merry Christmas and happy new year everyone!

Meanwhile I leave you with this caricature of Nicole Kidman I did.

http://amedeldesign.com/images/nicole.jpg

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