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hordePrime
11-25-2002, 05:56 AM
This is just something I threw together for a graphic narrative class I'm taking...

http://www.rsad.edu/~mpedro/page_final.jpg


Tell me what you think...
PsychedelicMind
11-25-2002, 06:40 AM
cooool. a frameless comic! Nice atmosphere you got working there :)

I believe you can still work on it somemore... some parts where you used the photoshop brush to paint could be refined.

eg. the places with the words "blam blam" is a little spoilt by the obvious ps brush shapes...

the coloring and stuff could be more grimy.. with dirt and ink spatters... :)

otherwise, that's a pretty interesting piece! Can we see more? :D
pregnant embryo
11-25-2002, 07:27 AM
It's GRAPHIC but where's the NARRATIVE? :shrug:

It is difficult to follow what is going on...

It is unclear who is speaking::shrug:
The man in the hat (Security of the masters) busting a trespasser (the nervous guy with the eye).
...or....
The nervous guy (servant of the masters) is "Taking him (man in hat) to his leader"

Whose hand is on the door knob?:shrug:

Is the CLICK from the gun or the door?:shrug:


Nice art thou. :thumbsup:
Dig the single panel page. :)
tigrvision
11-25-2002, 07:02 PM
Definitely an interesting setup you got there.
I got a handle on the dialogue as to who was saying what, but I don't think everyone would. In other words, I think you can work on being more clear as to who is speaking.
Also, I think the font needs some work. Right now it looks very bland compared with the interesting drawing you have going on.
Post some updates if you get to it.
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