Shooting a rifle

[inked]

hi SirRon,

looks good to me.. nicely animated :thumbsup:

[Sherif.Nagib]

- the animation is too fast.
- your last frame is a copy of your first frame , the gun and his hands and everything rests back to the same spot he started from ..looks too mechanical .
- the character is completely still and rigid before and after the shot.
- we don't get the time to relaize what's going on.. the clip length is one second.. lacks anticipation .

I think you can pull a good animation out of it, but it needs more work.

looks at the demoreel of bartek kujbida (http://www.tolmay.com/), he has a really good shot ofa guy shooting a gun .

[SirRon]

Thanks guys :)

Yeah, I was starting to wonder if it was too fast. But I made the first and last frames the exact same because I wanted to make the animation loop.

Thanks for the link! I remember seeing that same animation but I couldn't remember where and who did it.

[Suryawanshi]

the loop is fine..
once u see it looping it looks koool..otherwise looks prety fast...cant register...
but with the loop is nice :)
I wud not change the timing...I think its good :)
Sachin S. Suryawanshi

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