sungai
12-13-2005, 04:15 AM
Yes,thi is my first creation,some kind of story......so....have comment and critic XD.This story is about future,when human meet other species of the universe and fight for their freedom
The New History's begun in far future,i'm human,so let me tell by the sight of human to the whole story...
Chapter I:Being no more free
IN the last century of Human in Earth,the world totally collapsed,World War V destroyed everything and Humanity is the last species survie.The end of war mean the end of Earth,mankind must leave their home-planet to search for new place to live,nothing remain on earth but corpse of machine,steel junk and radiation......
In one day,Human's fate 's been changed.By using new technology of teleporting,they appeared in the farest galaxy that they've never discovered before.The Galaxy is burning,because war is everywhere,between the Fairos and the Predator.Fairos is just like human,their face,their voice and their body,only Fairos have long eyebrowns and glowing eyes,they live in .The Predator looks like demon,they born and born as fast as hell,their number 's unlimited,unless all's killed at once.But they still have leader,The biggest Predator with unpredictable Strength-know as Glarokarh.Galrokah served the all-mother of Predator,duty of all-mother 's born and born predator,her nest 's set on the Gloomy-Moon.
Return to Fairos's society,like i said just like Human,Fairos have a modern city and their planet filled with light everywhere,their weapon also better than Human,but they dont use it on destructive purpose.The Fairos live longer than human,someone say they live over 200 years old.
Fairos not welcome human,especially when human bring their whole army with them in the travel to find new home.Logean,president of Human,he's the one who United all nation of Human into one nation:Agella.Now he must negotiate with Fairos for land to live,Predator want fresh meat of human more than Fairos,and they're so many,human cant fight against them.At last,the king of Fairos-Oben accept to let human love by Fairos's supportment,Human must live outside space and fight against Predator by themselves.So Human built up their base on Space,they developed space ship,battle ship and military army.Logean have a dream to conquer Fairos's home,but lately,Fairos's known Logean's ambition,they attack and granted Logean a death penalty.Then Human no longer under Fairos's protection,they all be caught and forced to fight for Fairos against the Predator.
The New History's begun in far future,i'm human,so let me tell by the sight of human to the whole story...
Chapter I:Being no more free
IN the last century of Human in Earth,the world totally collapsed,World War V destroyed everything and Humanity is the last species survie.The end of war mean the end of Earth,mankind must leave their home-planet to search for new place to live,nothing remain on earth but corpse of machine,steel junk and radiation......
In one day,Human's fate 's been changed.By using new technology of teleporting,they appeared in the farest galaxy that they've never discovered before.The Galaxy is burning,because war is everywhere,between the Fairos and the Predator.Fairos is just like human,their face,their voice and their body,only Fairos have long eyebrowns and glowing eyes,they live in .The Predator looks like demon,they born and born as fast as hell,their number 's unlimited,unless all's killed at once.But they still have leader,The biggest Predator with unpredictable Strength-know as Glarokarh.Galrokah served the all-mother of Predator,duty of all-mother 's born and born predator,her nest 's set on the Gloomy-Moon.
Return to Fairos's society,like i said just like Human,Fairos have a modern city and their planet filled with light everywhere,their weapon also better than Human,but they dont use it on destructive purpose.The Fairos live longer than human,someone say they live over 200 years old.
Fairos not welcome human,especially when human bring their whole army with them in the travel to find new home.Logean,president of Human,he's the one who United all nation of Human into one nation:Agella.Now he must negotiate with Fairos for land to live,Predator want fresh meat of human more than Fairos,and they're so many,human cant fight against them.At last,the king of Fairos-Oben accept to let human love by Fairos's supportment,Human must live outside space and fight against Predator by themselves.So Human built up their base on Space,they developed space ship,battle ship and military army.Logean have a dream to conquer Fairos's home,but lately,Fairos's known Logean's ambition,they attack and granted Logean a death penalty.Then Human no longer under Fairos's protection,they all be caught and forced to fight for Fairos against the Predator.