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wr0416

12-11-2005, 02:33 AM

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Title: Sunny Afternoon
Name: Rong Wang
Country: Canada
Software: 3ds max

Hi: everyone

This is a sunny afternoon in my house backyard. I created this because I was inspired by the sun light in the time about 2hour before sunset.

hope you like it. any C&C are most welcome.

bitBrain

12-11-2005, 01:08 PM

Hey, I like the smoke from the barbeque, almost didn't see it at first!

It looks too clean though, as in too regular textures, no (apparent) bumpmaps, too straight edges. Also, I think this scene could benefit from a higher field of view (almost looks like it's shot through a telephoto lens now), and add some photo grain in Photoshop to add realism.

Remember to give life to all those flat, regular surfaces - you can add some variation with faint, soft spotlights in places, too, like on the grass.

ridiculous

12-12-2005, 01:45 AM

looks pretty good. i agree with the bump map quote from above. might spice it up a bit.

and the avalanche would look better than the canadiens on that chair!!! just messin.

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