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jig
12-10-2005, 10:30 PM
hi,

this is my first try at painting with a tablet. any feedback welcome.

Jack Youngblood
12-11-2005, 01:47 PM
Very good use of colors. Excellent.

It would be good if you can bring the whole of the image up to the same level that the face is (the ear looks a bit slight as does the hair). You could pull the neck back a bit and define more clearly the shape of her hair.

Also the eyes (especially the one nearest us) look a bit flat. The iris would be more of an ellipse from that angle, not a circle.

Maybe also the background could change colour. At the moment it is too close to the skin in tone/color.

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