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[JimPanse]

hi raffael,
to me it looks good... the acting works for me just fine.
i just have a few suggestions that might help to improve your shot
(... or to make it worse :)).

- his hips dip down in the beginning quiet fast. Maybe a little anticipation to that move looks good or make it a little bit slower.

-I would add some overlapping action to his spine and head.

-when he hits the table with his left hand the spine somehow pops into position. I would smooth that out... or.... it would be even cooler when his left shoulder still pops, but the spine and especially the right shoulder continue the forward movement . That could create a great illusion of him leaning his weight onto his left arm (<--- just suggestions )

-when he raises his hand i would let his fingertips point to the table a bit longer. That would create some nice floppy handanimation.

-to me it looks a bit strange when he furrows his brows. Maybe add one or two frames into the transition or anticipate that somehow... maybe with a headmove... i'm not sure about that.

... hmmm... thats all for now and be careful to add something from above:thumbsup:.... your animation could be destoyed.

Cheers

Thorsten

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