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CarlCampbell
11-23-2002, 02:07 PM
I made this quite some time ago but I figured I'd post it here anyway as I haven't got anything new finished yet. I'd like to here what you guys think, I know the platform isn't too ellaborate, but I'd just been working on the feeling of the whole scene. So.... what do you think? Any critiques more than welcome, just been at this game for a year or so! :bounce:

http://www.kaischaller.com/carl/platform.jpg

Carl :beer:
CarlCampbell
11-23-2002, 03:15 PM
Noone gonna say anything? :shrug: Its the only way to help me improve!!! :cry:

Carl
BoomRat
11-23-2002, 05:12 PM
I'll say somethin'...

The textures look very good.

The central cylinder is giving me a problem. Looks like you used a nurbs cylinder...and it shows. The areas that look like they should have joints are smooth. I'd make them sharper.

cheers
S(oWh@nD
11-24-2002, 07:38 AM
Toy like feeling. I need a monstre and giant feeling for this subject.
Made more atmosphere and blur the shadows, or bring something near to camera. (detailed rocks)
This will realise the size of things.
Other planet maybe need to other style...
I hope you this help a little...
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