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Tamuna
11-22-2002, 07:48 AM
Please comment my works.This is my forst post.

Tamuna
11-22-2002, 10:22 AM
please comment...

PsychedelicMind
11-23-2002, 08:58 AM
that's... interesting :p mmm... its not a bad start to drawing... the woman's neck is a tad too long... and i think her eyes are oversized (if you're aiming for realisim in this pic, that is) it makes her look strange...

I've not much to say at this point... just try not to make the pictures so gray... cos they look like you accidentily smudged the drawing with the side of your hand (i do that too sometimes :D)

yuppers. just keep drawing :D And keep posting! whoohoo!

eunuchbot
11-23-2002, 03:56 PM
the first on looks a bit odd, but I like the second one... one thing i think I see is on the right eye (his left) of the male head, I guess you were trying to go darker and ended up "carving" into the paper... do go harder on the paper, go softer on the lead (2b or 4b would get that darkness real good)

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