CGTalk - Mr, Andrei Op (3D)

archi_god

12-01-2005, 01:23 PM

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Title: Mr
Name: Andrei Op
Country: Afghanistan
Software: archicad, artlantis, photoshop

here are some renderings of a church i've made as a school project.

3d raised in archicad, rendering was made using artlantis.

crits are welcome.

mindless

12-01-2005, 10:12 PM

I really like the design of the church, but i think there's more to be accomplished with a better renderer :) Keep up the good work!

AmpedDigital

12-02-2005, 01:49 AM

i agree the model and design is great if only you fixed up lighting and enviroment and get rid of that cheap fog around the scene and you'll have a 4 star piece of art

aforetaste

12-02-2005, 12:59 PM

Nice work!
I like your design

elnady

12-02-2005, 01:53 PM

Great design man i love it

you can make the door in the middel a littel bigger

good job

bonestructure

12-03-2005, 08:25 PM

I like the starkness of it just as it stands

StudioWookie

12-06-2005, 05:56 AM

archi_god

12-09-2005, 11:25 PM

rendering ok...right about the photoshop fog..

architecturally, the church is towerlike, uncommon in catholic styles, why no use of orthogonal grids......why so many steps, a bit over the top.

but i do appreciate the intrusion of plane elements in the balisica..

hi

i am a student in the architecture school, and we were given this project. in our town, there is the foundation of this church (the work on it has been stopped), and our theme was to propose the continuing of the construction, on the existent foundation (the plan is square). at this point, the stairs are already built up, so i couldn't get rid of them.

thanks for the crits.

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