Character: Su

[kmanning]

http://www.staticcurve.com/D7images/SuModel7.jpg
the black areas are what hasnt been addressed yet, and the dress thing still needs detailing

[ScudzAlmighty]

looks great so far, maybe post some wires? and some closer shots around the colar and such so we can see the details that are there?

[kmanning]

close up on the top half.. still a ways to go detail wise.. but hes getting there... ill post a wire in a min
http://www.staticcurve.com/D7images/01_backup/SUClose.jpg

[kmanning]

I have a lowrez of the head that I plan on taking into zbrush. This is just the smoothed version
http://www.staticcurve.com/D7images/01_backup/suWire.jpg

[ScudzAlmighty]

i love it:thumbsup:
i wonder how sturdy that shoulder pad is though, it seems a little thin to hold up to any kind of impact, it's a very cool design though,
i might suggest getting rid of the inner layer of the dress, and adding something similar to the ring things, or something, but that's just me
what software are you using for this version?

[kmanning]

im gonna do some loose cloth as the inner layer and something connecting each piece of the outer layers. Maybe leather lacing.. who knows.. thanks for the comments.. im using maya 6.5 by the way

[kmanning]

not much of an update, but I added some wrinkles into the underskirt.. not sure if I like them.. still havnt touched the hands, arms or feet. And still trying to figure out the rest of the design... I would love to hear what you alll think. Thanks
http://www.staticcurve.com/D7images/SuModel8.jpg

[Jjack]

I have only one thing to say , CONTINUE the great work
i really like your stuff , great design and clean modelling

[Neeno]

this concept is excellent and the model.. so clean wires.. inspiring

[the-lone-deranger]

looking forward to seeing this guy with some textures...

[rasmusW]

hey kmanning!

lookin good. nice details and great characteristics.

just got a few crits. think the arms are just a wee-bit to big (-or musculare), as they are now, compared to the rest of the body. the scull at the end of his staff, should also be "locked" somehow. just thinkin', when he's fighting or whatever he's doing with the staff, woulden't fall off, as it is right now..? might just be me.

really lookin' forward for your next step.

[kmanning]

Thanks guys.

abyss103 < Good point about the skull. I will tie it to the staff a little better. I havnt really done any work to the arms yet, but I will tone down the muscle scale as well. Hopefully I can get to it after work today.

the lone deranger < Me too, its been a long time since I have texture anything

Neeno < Thank you very much

Jjack < Thanks man, I plan to push this guy as far as I can.

[DieByTheSword]

jesus, this is real good man.. poly pushing crazy..

I have 2 crits:

1) the cloth design is kinda strange... can u post some reference?
2) there is a clipping near the written part of the cloth (by the neck).. that 'ball' inside
the hole in the armour is odd.. not pratical if its supposed to hold something..

;)

[kmanning]

DieByTheSword - thanks for the comments man. 1.) Im not using any spacific ref or concepts for the character, can ya be a little more spacific on what you think looks strange? 2.) The ball thing is odd, I was intending it on being a broch of some sort that would pin the cloth to the undershirt. yet im sure I can come up with something better.

Thanks again for the crits.

[kmanning]

update for the night http://www.staticcurve.com/D7images/SuModel9.jpg still havnt worked on his arms, hands or feet. I will tomorrow

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