The INVISIBLE FORCE

[carlsden]

Starting to put the colours in..
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8720/tornadob0fx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[carlsden]

More colour

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/7756/tornadoc6pe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[carlsden]

Little detail.... Lots more to be done.... Please do comment and tell me how to improve....

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/7708/tornadod7cx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[carlsden]

Do comment on it you guys, I'm still learning!

[Monster_General]

I like the Tornado :thumbsup: Good going ... I think you are good at this thing ... I think that one would be good piece after all colourings :)

[carlsden]

more colour

http://img496.imageshack.us/img496/8449/tornadoe3mh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Mu]

the subspirals and the details on the tornado do really look great already - but I must warn you. The better it gets, the more detail you have to put in to cope with the level you set yourself:scream:

One or two things though

- the colors of the grass as well as of the volcano are much too saturated. Considering the clouded sky the green schould be much paler (not lighter, but less saturation)

- the volcano schould be less saturated to indicate distance. Distant objects get less and less saturated and tend to blueish hues.

- compositionwise I would do without the volcano eruption. The Tornado is big and impressive, don't steal the viewer's attention with another much less impressive action in the background. Also, I mean, man... that's somehow too much, hope there's no dam nearby that's about to burst:D

so: am anxiously waiting! Let's see more!

[carlsden]

Mr. Moo thanks for the comments..
Here's a little update.. Some more detail...

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5203/tornadof7fp.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)

[Mu]

What's happened - Did the tornado suck in the landscape?:scream:

Or are you reconsidering the composition in general?

Tornado: I think you will have to apply at least the same level of detail to the tihng as a whole as in the subtube on the left.

Also, you should figure out a clear form at the upper end. It looks to amorph, lacking a clear form...

[carlsden]

Thanks mr.moo. I'm very busy at the moment and trying to get another project finished. I will try to keep you guys updated as soon as do add something more to the composition.

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