Helllllllllp!~ Critique Please~

[leejusuk]

N E one?
Hellooo~?

[Jartain]

Looks good!

[some_canadian_kid]

hey man whats up, if you want more critque, post on CG char, good place for animators

anyway- the forearms dont fall like the should on the first pickup
- the way he posistion the guy, pulling him onto his back feels a bit awkward
(i would roll the guy towards one side by lifting up the one arm and get the guy to slip under the arm having the drunk fall into your first lift posistion...where the head is just past the arm)

-you do a good job of showing weight and the guy of lifting the chest of the drunk, but the intial lift of the drunks pelvis seems too easy
-with a heavy guy on your back,(espcially lifting him up you'd need to learn forward so you dont fall back.

the ending is good he's leant forward and shows a struggle to get to his feet.

i'd like see when its done

peace

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