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RonReezy
11-23-2005, 05:22 PM
Enviroment: Mission Entrance

I am in a 3d art and animation class and I just started, so I was seeing if anyone would want to critique how this model is coming along. The object is for a Mission Level. Inspiration comes from the recent completion of GUN. The program being used is Max 7. Texturing was just done on the front. I plan to do a Multi/Sub texture and Map the UV Coordinates. The model has 932 triangles with a limit of 1,000. A critque I'm looking for is tips about how to improve the model (not so much the texture). Critiques on the textures are appreciated though.

Here's some pictures:
Basic Render
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/6783/render6bu.png
Wireframe with Texture
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/4023/renderwiretext0rs.png
Wireframe
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/4098/renderwire9pk.png

TIA for any comments.

Primo_itch
11-23-2005, 08:19 PM
If you could post bigger pictures it would help :)

About the model : I think you can save some polys on the top, making it a little less rounded and use then to add some more details to the walls... They're pretty flat right now.

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