Character: Watchman

[ersinkoc]

your scene looks good like the other one of your's. i really liked the stones, bridge and the ground.
but this time your character looks like unfinished, it needs more dirt, bump.
also the cloth looked so smooth to me, any more bumps? :)
you may add some more little stones to the ground...

i hope it was constructive critique..

nice job though, i look to see it after you refine the character :)

[JeyJey]

Thanks for your helpful comment:)
But this picture I finished at the beginning of the year ..I will not any longer change it.
nevertheless many thanks :)

[k2skier]

I have to agree with ersinkoc in saying that it looks nice but unfinished, however I think that the main area that is lacking is in his skin. Also, just because you "finished" this image earlier in the year doesn't mean you can't go back and complete it.

[JeyJey]

Thanks for your Advice.
Their are right.:)
I will be occupied still once with the picture.
I will post it later here. Thank again :)

Many greetings
JeyJey

[PotatoHead]

hey, another good piece of art there! i like yer style, and i agree on the crits given by ersinkoc, but overall, its very good. you only need to work on the details to make it even better!

btw: dont appologize for your english, i mean, cmon, its not as if it makes you any less than people that can speak english fluently.:)

cheers,
Tom

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