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[Intervain]

sheesh! one feels unconfortable just by looking at him.. I think those gums need to be separated from each other a bit more - they almost merge in the middle. I'd personally like a little arch inside just like the one visible from the side view... that's MO :)

The nose looks too thick in the middle in the underneath shot.

Are you planning on adding wrinkles in zbrush? If not then I'd give him more of those around the eyes and forehead.

Sweet modeling Steven - hower disturbing it feels :scream:

[logistiks]

bastard :P your modelling reel gonna be so sweet at the end of the year.

keep it up. i knew you would pull off good stuff.

[GI jay]

nice start, well its more than a start but its looking great anyway.
Im also really impressed by your first model.
all i can offer is my support, just keep it up brother, your doin great.

[Jinian]

Those small intricate details that you touch up and polish up really is what makes your model. Love your work.

[DieByTheSword]

yuck... this is sick... but nicely done!

:)

[3d55steven]

-Intervain thanks alot for the cooments :) i defin agree with the nose been too thick, i will look into that. as far as the wrinkles, i think i will defin play with z brush and add a lot of details on the face.

-logistiks,GI jay,Jinian thanks guys :)

-DieByTheSword i am glad u find it sick, that is one of the emotions i want to creat with this peice :)

i will post the concept art later today

cheers

steve

[formoso]

nice looking so far. i think the middle of the upper lip between the two "spider fangs" should be stretched out leaving a bit of space rather than fitting the contours. also i think some hint of his deformity should be translated to other areas of the facial anatomy, mostly in the cheeks/lower jaw or temple areas imo. so far hes looking mean. as for helpless im not sure u captured that quite yet, i think its the eyes.

[rasmusW]

hey steven!

-yet another awesome model (-can you do any bad things?:))

here is my crit/suggestions... -think you should make the eyes a bit bigger or at least make em look more vulnerable. thickening the neck a bit (-know you haven't come to that part yet) and like intervain said: seperate those gums a bit. probaly also give em a bit more insect feel. they are lookin a bit like little sausages atm. (hope i didn't offend you or anything).

-just wanna say it once more... awesome

keep it up

[Igo]

I disagree about the top lip needing to be stretched, becase if it were it'd be painful as hell to open up. Maybe not have it follow the form so much, but it definitly needs to be loose to a degree for functional purposes IMO.

I agree about the nose being thick underneath, and I really suggest moving onto the body and arms soon (if you still plan on doing them.) Just personal preference, but there always seems to be soemthing off in a model when you render one area so much before you start the rest. It can lose that gesture and natural feel and you could spend a long time trying to fix it.

good work DOOD

[cshanks]

couple of things and this might have alredy been said. I think his mandibles and oral cavity in general are kinda small for the stingers coming out of them. Whatever though, it's based in reality so I think that could work. I don't, however think that neck size could support such a large noggin. Overall though, I think its a super gnarly looking creature and I look forward to seeing the progress.

[PinkBunny]

It makes me squirm and brings out the arachnophobia in me... so I guess Congratulations!

[DieByTheSword]

Can u pose 'it' with a open mouth? dunno how the fangs will articulate.

[MaTaDoR]

So disturbing to look at... good job man.

[Heber]

nice work steven,
seems like your transition to 3d is going very well , no crits but i would like to see that mouth open up and expose all the nasty fangs/tongue some hanging saliva and all....might be cool to show that in your demo.

[agasco]

yo man, great character so far, and very disturbing, you have a style forsure. Are you making the whole body? very cool stuff man. waiting for more.

later man

[Rumr]

i really this, keep rockin!

[lordsol]

i want to kiss that shit. wow steven your model is going to be amazing. idon;t know why people post in this kind of forums but is funny. see how bad u are in tekken and how good are u for modeling. i cannot belive the abismal distance. betwen both things.

[fabianloing]

STEVEN!!
hahahah! I LOVE IT MAN! I do agree with heber though. I think
it will be so very cool if you open his mouth! make his inner mouth
(gum, teeth, tongue) as ugly as possible cause i think you want
him to be ugly right? hehehe...but MAN! i love it! can't wait to see
the concept. I knew it your demo reel will definitely turn out superb!
Great job man! definitely keep it coming! by the way,i like the render you
did on this creature! he looks sad but freaky. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

-Fab

[dmonk]

Nice work. I love the character!

[rblitz7]

WOAH! Awesome concept!:scream: This is looking really cool.

[JBoskma]

Kickass render Steven. Love the colors and the design. Updates!

[gigan]

e-mail me objs of all your modeelllssss

[rhin0]

hey great model so far, looks like he got nutz in da mouth :) keep it up!

[Sully]

Beautiful work..Great concept to what is he half spider? are yo ugonna make body for him..

[J.Gaeta]

Great character! Can't wait to see what the rest of him will look like. Updates please!

[Cleveland]

this is great. looks like he's swallowing two boiled elephant testicles. but very believable modeling. like everyone else i'm looking forward to more.

cleveland

[rasmusW]

hey steven!

-please post your last pics of this model, so everybody who haven't seen them at zbc, gets the chance. cuz this is great work:thumbsup:

-can't wait to what you pull out your sleeve next...

-r

[mijaba]

I think you should give that fella some more eyes. Like 3 more sets, all with browlines. Looks good and SICK!

[frameless]

Hey steve,
why don't u just post the final version huh? ;)
I have already seen it on ZBC, it turned out awesome :thumbsup:

[Sully]

Wo freakasouras! does his mouth open up like the preditor when hes pissed that would be cool to see!! Very good model lookin forward to seeing where your gonna go with this one..

[graffb]

Oh my god! That's fantastic!

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