I´m new user! please help me! see my post

[de_tomato]

It looked like those mechanical toy car. Pretty nice render.

[georgeblunt]

nice work so far. :thumbsup:

i would definatly work on the environment (eg. the floor looks way too flat. i'd suggest a bump map and maybe a texture with a higher resolution).
And the model looks a little cluttered above the windows on the side of the car. Too many tris?

other than that. good work! keep it coming. :)

[dmrdesigns]

Thanks! i will try to fix that errors

[megadave2002]

Great start man.
What you using to render? The render is awesome.

[Tweak Tool]

very good start. :)

[devailo]

wel congrats as you were saying "first work" and things like that i tought of something very basic but yours is trully beautifull for a first model. cheers
and as you wanted critics :
1.you should make how do you say ? rear bumpers?
2. you should move out the tires a little
3.then it comes if you dont want to make a interior of a car make the windows black :D
and that's all for now
cheers again

[hoodedpython]

Thats very good, the only crit I have is that there is a seam in the middle.

[dmrdesigns]

For that scene i´m use vray render with hdri ilumination.

[dmrdesigns]

thanks for you criticize them, I let the Link to them of the new one render with some things that fix.

Render with depth of field
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7278/fiat4kr.jpg

Render without depth of field
http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/1489/fiat18pt.jpg

Thanks to all


DMR

[nomadicrain]

Looking at your DOF image...the focus point is in the wrong place. It looks like the focus point is at the door handle on the car as opposed to the front of the car where you would expect the focus to be. I would look at your DOF map again to try to get the focus on the front of the car, and also give it a little more depth so more of the car is in focus at one time, as it stands it looks like there is only a 4-6 inch window of focus on the car which kills tons of detail.


The 2nd render looks pretty good. I think if you adjust your DOF settings you will come up with a nice render. Just give some more environment - trees, buildings, signs, - or table, kid, other toys, etc. - and you will have a pretty good render there, depending on whether you are going for a toy or a real car.

[dmrdesigns]

Yes, you are right, will prove with the focus point in the front part of the car. With respect to the enviroment, it will prove tom make some buildings.

thank you very much by the advices

greetings

-DMR-

[georgeblunt]

hey! great improvement, mate. keep it coming. :thumbsup:

[dmrdesigns]

thanks!! georgeblunt (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=63352) ; I am working the enviroment, when it has something I post it

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