Raji
11-14-2005, 09:08 PM
Hey everyone!
This was intended for a short 2-3 minute animation i was going to work on (which is why it's only 3 pages long). I recorded all of John's lines, even prepared the setting for the first scene and started animating, but then abandonned the whole thing when i realized that Lowman 1.2, as great a rig as he may be, wasn't going to pull off a short story like this convincingly. :)
Good practice and i wanted to see what kind of response i'd get from it. Feel free to tear it apart. A friend of mine, Alex Bourt, was kind enough to have already done that to get the script to where it is now. Aside from formatting errors, i considered it to be done but like i said, i still want as many critiques as possible.
Enjoy and let me know what you think!
Raji
This was intended for a short 2-3 minute animation i was going to work on (which is why it's only 3 pages long). I recorded all of John's lines, even prepared the setting for the first scene and started animating, but then abandonned the whole thing when i realized that Lowman 1.2, as great a rig as he may be, wasn't going to pull off a short story like this convincingly. :)
Good practice and i wanted to see what kind of response i'd get from it. Feel free to tear it apart. A friend of mine, Alex Bourt, was kind enough to have already done that to get the script to where it is now. Aside from formatting errors, i considered it to be done but like i said, i still want as many critiques as possible.
Enjoy and let me know what you think!
Raji