character: hi there, meet Mila !

[fred806]

Yééé papaaaaa!!!!!!

C un bon début!!! T'en avais marre des WIPs avoue!!!
L'absence d'ombres à la racines des cheveux fait vraiment trop mito, de même que la couleur des lèvres très flashy.

Translation: Bood beginning, but the hair need projected shadows, and the lips look too shiny and colored. Continue!!!

[Titank]

Tin quand meme comme tout le monde s'en bat les couilles de ma mila c'est dingue :thumbsdow

Yes indeed, but i got some plugins probs that i can't solve yet so no shadows ( bleh ).
Lips shine too much ? Well frankly i dunno, i'll check this if more crits pop up about this point :rolleyes:

[tariel]

Hi there!
Some more crit.
I think you need to work on ligthning since it kind strange now. For example her shoulder is well lighted while her right cheek is pretty dark.
The skin color on her shoulder and cheek is somehow different.
Also probably because of lightning her right half of the face of looks like it has been sun-burnt.
Then why her right cheek looks like there is something under it ... ? :)
And...it looks like there are no eyelashes on her right eye :rolleyes:
Maybe aslo tone-down the lips a bit.

Ok, but anyways really nice start!
Good luck!;)

[Titank]

Well you're right there's a sunburn effect but i like it, i think sunburns give some personnality to a picture.
Missing eyelashes...
Hum, i must've hidden one too many object (good shot Titank !! :applause: )
As for the strangeness that was seeked somehow, but it must be improvable for sure.
Thx for the critiques tariel.:cool:

[tariel]

Actually, you are right about the sunburn-effect, that it gives some personality, it does indeed. But maybe you can try to make it softer a bit. :thumbsup:

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