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02-26-2002, 09:14 PM
I've been browsing on the board sfor a while now, and I thought it was about time to get some proper critique ; )
the subject is probably old but I am trying to avoind the obvious cliches (honest) ..
basically I modeled the skin (mostly for modeling practice) as boundaries for what are soon to be lots of mechanical parts etc ..
she is supposed to be manga-ish, but mainly I am just looking for some critique regarding propertions (and ofcourse all other comments are welcome aswell ) ..
02-26-2002, 09:29 PM
the backbone bothers me, though... i think that if you widen the gap between the metal backbone and the rest of the flesh-like of the back that it would help define each as separate objects.
02-26-2002, 09:54 PM
Nice modeling and the lighting for the demonstration is pretty nice too.
2 things I could suggest would be to merge more the back neck metal into here back. In the view where we see her from front, it seems a bit odd.
second thing would be to shrink the hands a bit, they seem out of proportion.
Hope this helps.
02-26-2002, 10:18 PM
personally I like the larger hands...(unless your going for absoulute anotomical correctness) but I kinda like the way it is.
02-26-2002, 10:23 PM
WoW, that's great. It is just mechanical enough to be creepy.:)
02-26-2002, 10:26 PM
well the idea was that I was going to replace the smooth skin with an almost completely mechanical body, but think more rusty old pnuematics etc rather then anime style mecha.
02-27-2002, 12:06 AM
i like it!! :)
02-27-2002, 12:40 AM
though i think that her hands in whole schould be formed round (bowellike) and less straight fingers, depends on intention, especially w/ androids. shos a good job
02-27-2002, 08:28 AM
Fantastic work Talisman, maybe scale her ears down a little, but that's just jealous nitpicking!:D :p
02-27-2002, 08:49 AM
beautiful sculpting. fantastic. me likey.
02-27-2002, 07:45 PM
i saw this post yesterday and was very impressed.
i like everything about her. excellent job man.
01-13-2006, 01:00 AM
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