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sticky rice
11-19-2002, 07:56 AM
:applause:

The Chinese Warrior( The Tang Dynasty) .
我的中国唐朝武将。


Hello everyone, I am a girl from Chinese.
PsychedelicMind
11-19-2002, 08:20 AM
You're from China? Neato!

:D I can see you put in a lot of effort to do the details... Look at that armour! Wowsa! :thumbsup: ever thought of coloring this?
Jake
11-19-2002, 08:43 PM
Hi there!

Excellent drawing! You really have an eye for detail. Here are some things I would like to see:

1. More variation in the line weight. Particularly a heavier line on the outside.
2. A more dynamic pose and expression. Especially for a warrior.
3. Some sort of background.

What you've done here is really good. I'd like to see a more developed composition.
decoy
11-19-2002, 10:47 PM
:thumbsup: I think the drawing is great the way it is....wouldn't change a thing! :thumbsup:

Quack Quack
METALKID
11-20-2002, 03:06 AM
:wavey: :wavey:
so many Chinese here,of coures including me ~hehe
Excellent work,color it later~i wanna see more details
freddy7133d
11-20-2002, 03:19 AM
wow
you have a great style....
very nicework!!!!!!!!!!!:applause: :thumbsup:
sticky rice
11-20-2002, 09:25 AM
Guys Thanx!! I 'll make it better...:drool:
DimSum
11-20-2002, 11:58 AM
Thx to u sticky rice to show ur traditional culture ! As Jake said it would be more dynamic if you put some variations in ur next drawing : dynamic pose, different variations in ur line (stronger in backward and weaker behinf eg...). Impatient to see more charachter !
sticky rice
11-20-2002, 12:42 PM
:rolleyes: :p


Thanx for your suggestion DIMSUM.

The style in Chinese painting is called“白描“ （line drawing).

The point you guys mentiond is important!:) I'll make a change ,but just a little . :)
eunuchbot
11-24-2002, 09:14 AM
one major thing: his left foot (our right) is too small for the body plus its smaller than the other foot

second his head looks funny, is it uneven?

good detail though
sticky rice
11-25-2002, 01:43 AM
:p

I don't think his face looks funny, but the other suggestion I'll accept.

Thx man.
eunuchbot
11-25-2002, 04:04 AM
i must need more sleep... there's nothing wrong with the head!! I don't know what I was thinking... the feet though, I was awake for.
sticky rice
11-25-2002, 05:10 AM
:applause:


Thanks! I'll correct it..
beastlogic
11-25-2002, 06:18 AM
hello! I'm chinese 2
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