Little Geisha

[Xion-Cajou]

Hmm...151 views and not a single comment. Is something wrong with it, or does no one

like japanese girls? Cmon anyone!

[werd]

I realy like the face but there are a few things that need some work. first, The eyes are cloudy and not contrasted enough. the upper lip looks sort of flat, it could just be the lighting tho. and lastly the hair needs a bit of work, it looks like tshe has none on the back of her head. overall its pretty good:thumbsup: , mayb post a few more views and a wireframe so it is easier to crit.

[silentsamurai]

I think the nose and eyes area needs the most work. other than that, I think your model is not bad.

[Xion-Cajou]

Thanks guys!

@werd>> Jeah i already changed the lips and she indeed hasnt hair on the back of her
head jet... i have to improve the opacity maps then i will rework the whole hair
and make it long and blowing in the wind...

@silentsamurai>> I know the nose doesnt look very asian but i think its more interesting this way.

Here some more wips showin a bit more what im goin for...

[Cleveland]

looking better all the time. just a couple of crits. you may want to take a run at her breasts, they seem a little not right. her abdomen looks mostly fine but a little square in the xz plane. um, and her skin texture needs a noisy specular map. her skin looks too dry and even. that's about it. i like her eyes.

keep it up.

cleveland

[Xion-Cajou]

Thanks Cleveland. Some good points that can be improved...i think the breast and
abdomen areas need some additional modeling to make them look more organic.
Btw, its a pretty cool character youre working on.

[stuh505]

looking good, can be improved a lot though. her nipples are too large! so are her breasts. what is that wierd hole in the shirt? her abdomen muscles are too srtong and square. she should have a weak little body. her face looks too youngto be a geisha!

[Xion-Cajou]

Jup,... she looks younger than she really is, but this is neccessary to make her
more feminin and to show she is soft and sensitive, and i dont know if she will
completely be a geisha... what i had in mind was a young girl with traditional
japanese clothes and colorful makeup.
Every part of the process influences another part, so lets see what this is gointo
looklike whwn its finished.

[stuh505]

The skin material was much better before

The eyelashes are better now

The hair looked more like hair before, but I think you need to work on a more realistic hair style, it just looks like its shooting out of her head

[AstroSanchezz]

i agree about the skin surface
keep updates coming! should end up a good one

[Xion-Cajou]

Normally i try to keep stylistic elements and color scheme to fit together...so this time

perhaps ill break from this and mix traditional and futuristic elements to create something

new.

Here are some experimentals>>>>

[Xion-Cajou]

Opacity maps work pretty good now, improved eye texture, changed the skin tones

a bit... and some more subtle changes. She still hasnt enough hair as you can see,

got to find a solution without using millions of polys.

[luciferous]

looks nice, but noto nly does she not have enough hair but its also in completely the wrong style for a geisha

[Xion-Cajou]

As i sayd earlyer it wasnt sure that she gonna completely be a geisha...i had in mind to use traditional japanese styles, but the more she developes, the more she actually looks like a geisha. One important thing was, that she would have some accessoires and makeup, and of course a kimono.

Nuf talk, this is the new state>>>

[Xion-Cajou]

Put this together tonight, its like a scetch of the final... gonna ad more

textures, change colors, do some modeling on body and clothes, ...

[Flur]

Hey xioncajou, very nice work so far. I like the face expresion and the colors of her make-up...keep us posted.

Cheers

Flur

[Xion-Cajou]

Thanks Flur. Heres a little update,...

[Xion-Cajou]

Thanks again everybody. The work is done, finished image can be found in the 3d gallery.
Hope youll like it...
Have fun!

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