another first human head

[lapinbily]

c'mon ... anyone ?

[thehive]

you have a good start , but i think the ear is a bit too far back, an the eyelashes ar lookin on the femine side the archin a bit too high at the end. but keep it up look good

[OptimusDinkus]

lookin spiffy, especially since the lips dont look like a fish's (the most common problem in a billion models) but show us a profile, and get that ear right. And this forum usually smells for critiques lately.....

[wybl]

that looks really nice, but the skin looks very solid (because the sss stopped working?) Get it fixed and i think it will look much much better. the eyes might use some highlights

[lapinbily]

hey thx for crits !

here is the profile of it

i moved the ear foward a bit and started tweaking the eye to make it less feminine

http://www.mssvfx.com/gui/pix/Guilhem_Garcin_Head_WIP_02.jpg

OptimusDinkus : wold you recommand a forum where i can get this to get critburned to the ground ?

[Cleveland]

i think the real problem is that there's not much wrong with it that you're not aware of. you're fixing the ear and the lack of SSS has been noted. other than that, it's a solid model, but without much else to go on, people aren't going to say much. people WILL burn you here if there's a need. but there's no need. keep working, fix the skin, give him a body and some personality and you're going to be fine.

edit: mental ray doesn't like triangles but will render them, but the SSS if i remember rightly cannot if you're rendering subD. you're not rendering subD 'cos something's coming out. check that mentalrayTexture1 is hooked into the lightmap AND the SSS material. um, that should work, if not, i don't know why. nothing's fatal as you're getting an image, probably just a missed connection somewhere.

cleveland

[lapinbily]

ok cleveland i get it :cool:

i checked vith some torus with triangles in it .. sss worked on it ..

found out the problem anyway : stupid normals were reversed .. bring on da renderztuningz !!

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[lapinbily]

same dude with sss this time

the ear is still not quite right but anyway ... http://www.mssvfx.com/gui/pix/Guilhem_Garcin_Head_WIP_03.jpg

[TheCheshireCat]

Let me begin by saying that this is a very good head.

Now, I might be repeating things that have already been said, but I think that the parts that require improvements are:

1) Buttom lip- too flat.
2) Eye is too far in- Try rotating his eye pupil to the side to see if he is "able to see" from the sides- if not you might want to edit the eye contour a bit.


Again, overral this is very good, don't get me wrong.

Keep it up.

[lapinbily]

last update for today , cheezy background is a must :D

http://www.mssvfx.com/gui/pix/Guilhem_Garcin_Head_WIP_04.jpg


The Cheshire Cat : thanx for the crits, did the lips and the eyes definitively looks better now :beer:

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