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Spady
11-18-2002, 06:32 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/8533/10_yr_old_large_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/8533/10_yr_old_large.jpg)

Here's May, the main character of my upcoming short. I know the hair is far from being perfect, but after hours and hours of tweaking, I got fed up and decided to let it go...

Neo85
11-18-2002, 07:00 AM
very nice...i like it...remind me a manga style...
:thumbsup: :applause:

Facial Deluxe
11-18-2002, 07:17 AM
Alors c'est une histoire avec une petite fille.... héhéhé

Salut Spaddy :)

Signé Thomson

vorlon
11-18-2002, 08:11 AM
I am working on modeling a 10 year old girl too in cartoon style, yours look so good!! Nothing wrong with it from I can see about the hair.

NeonGuy
11-18-2002, 08:36 AM
i like her much, but there's something wrong with the eyes.
maybe the eyeballs are too small. i can see a gray area next to the eyeballs.
everything else looks pretty good.
the hair needs a specular map!!

good work!

zzzrByte
11-18-2002, 09:00 AM
Looks great, the hair too.

But there is definetly something wrong with the eyes:
A. The eyeball looks too small like it isn't filling the eye socket completly. Kid's eyeball's are about the same size as an adult's... that's why their eyes always look big.
B. The distance between the eyes is too big. The distance between eyeball and eyeball should be one eyeball long. I'm not sure if that measurement is also correct with children, but her eye's are definetly too far off.

I really love the piece of cloth in her hair, but it could use a specular map (or lower values if it already has one) and a bump map (or slightly higher values if it already has one)

Except for the eye problem, the rest is golden... The shape of her mouth and nose are great, and the curves of her neck are also great!

How did you do her hair?
Can we see a wireframe of her?

zeb
11-18-2002, 09:17 AM
Hey Spady

she looks great and young ...yummm

:scream:

I'm sure u're a fast worker, how much time to get this result ?
HAHAHA

Keep update on this work, still waiting for the animation

hiko_
11-18-2002, 12:18 PM
Waouw great work !
But the hair is prout compared with the head ! :shame:

You have 5 year to correct that !
Bisous mon japounet :)

dark_lotus
11-18-2002, 01:31 PM
Very beautifull, i think just a simple bump map would fix the hair, which doesn't look that bad!

I think its very nice!

Kulu_Kulu
11-18-2002, 04:57 PM
yo Spiiidy, it suxxx , it's not with such screen that you'll win a CGtalk award :scream:

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
in deed it's very cute !

prout

kulu

ps: mf it the first time i have to speak in english on this board, because of u !!

Spady
11-18-2002, 05:51 PM
In fact there is some specular on the hair, but oddly, Vray seems to have a hard time handling multi-layered specular shading ... It renders correctly in the max scanline renderer though... I will try to fix it asap.

zzzrByte: The hair was done using Nurbs patches. It's a pain in the ass to manage with Max. Next time I plan to use polygons instead, they are a lot more flexible, and with the new UVW editor in Max5, UVs are not a problem anymore.
The eyes are manga style, so I guess I could deviate from the rules of thumb a little :)

NeonGuy: I have yet to apply a texture for the area surrounding the eyelids. That's why it looks so greyish.

Facial Deluxe: Hey guess what? We are about to have another round with Thomson :)

Zeb&Hiko: I am pretty lazzy when it comes to personal work, there's so many things to do in life! (like playing games and watching DVDs :)


http://spady.free.fr/Wip/May%20Head%20Wire%201.jpg

Martyr
11-18-2002, 06:27 PM
First great work,


I wanna if your main inspiration is Katharine cullen from the little show called "the girl from tomorrow(Alana ou le futur imparfait)" look how she look!:applause:

Facial Deluxe
11-19-2002, 06:02 AM
Hey Spady, avec quoi as tu modelisé cette beauté LW ou Max ?

Shaykai
11-19-2002, 06:29 AM
Very cute model!
i love her lips, you did an awesome job all around!
Love to see her moving, any plans for an animation?

I dig the hair BTW.

Shaykai

dobermunk
11-19-2002, 09:06 AM
Hi! Very nice!
Have you got a website? Easier for me to keep up-to-date ;-)

fr3drik
11-23-2002, 05:23 PM
Interesting choice of eye color.
Very nice.

lildragon
11-23-2002, 05:25 PM
Ok can we say cute? yeah I knew that you could. :D SLick modeling and I really dig the lips! and the entire face structure.

You have recieved the CGtalk choice award. Please feel free to display this image anywhere you like! Congrats again, very well done

http://www.cgtalk.com/plug_award/cgtalk_award.jpg

P.S. if you need a different background, please send me a PM with the RGB values.

salud

DimSum
11-23-2002, 06:21 PM
Cool cool the model :thumbsup:
LOL putain comment l'autre nous ressort "Alana ou le futur imparfait" ! Ca me rappelle toutes les séries bidons (mais ô combien joyeuses) que je regardais étant tout petit :D

pixelpimp
11-23-2002, 06:45 PM
Spady

Great job on the modeling and lighting. It looks like something that Squaresoft would do.

wgreenlee1
11-23-2002, 07:47 PM
Very good work.
Lets see the body now.

Baby Dee
11-23-2002, 08:30 PM
Looks great :buttrock:

Can't wait to see more :)

Ultimatebadass
11-23-2002, 08:36 PM
WOW. Very nice model :) Great job!

Neox
11-23-2002, 11:12 PM
holy shit she is so damn sweet!

bored alien
11-23-2002, 11:34 PM
Very very cute. She looks like a young Hitomi (http://www.tecmo.co.jp/product/doa3/jpg/hitomi00.jpg) :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

jtk77
11-24-2002, 12:08 AM
nice its good.

lmc
11-24-2002, 01:57 AM
Great job but is it the hair a bit hard to do it?!:beer:

Kamui
11-24-2002, 02:54 AM
great model! the face and lips are very nice.. the simple textures, i love that style, and it's something i want to accomplish. also the hair is very cute, as is the ribbon. just a bit more shine in the hair would look really nice! great work! :thumbsup:

Kryptochan
11-24-2002, 05:44 AM
What can you say? Man shes awesome!

SheepFactory
11-24-2002, 05:46 AM
very nice model , I love the lips especially.

The only problem is with the eye area , there is a big gap next to the eye and the eye texture can use some work.

looking forward to an update.

A|i

HapZungLam
11-24-2002, 06:29 AM
Originally posted by HellRender
(I hope she has clothes on tho:hmm: )

I hope she "doesn't" has clothes on tho :p :drool:

fantastic. can't wait to see the whole body. well, actually i kind of like her look right now, without too much textures. weeee....:applause:

facial
11-24-2002, 06:55 AM
Hi, Spady. Very nice work here, I love it. Have u got a website of your works? I wanna to see more your works. Keep post up!:beer:

Michael Chen
11-24-2002, 06:58 AM
Pretty simple and Cute.

Although your hair is way too perfect but it fits.

Simplicity is the key (unless you are going for realism)

Keep up the good work :)

Technofreak
11-24-2002, 09:33 AM
nice, i like the headband also thats a nice addition

what shader are u using for the hair? right now it looks like a lamby but u should try experimenting with the anisintropic one,
works great on nurbs hair [atleast in maya]

Kulu_Kulu
11-24-2002, 10:03 AM
huhu Spady tout le monde partage tes gouts! :p

bravo ! :wavey:

kulu

Nevermore
11-24-2002, 02:48 PM
Originally posted by HapZungLam
I hope she "doesn't" has clothes on tho :p :drool:



hmmm you DID read the fact that she was TEN years old, right :rolleyes: sicko! ;)



anyway, great work, really great.. could've come straight out of the Squaresoft studios.. keep up the good work! :applause:

Neox
11-24-2002, 03:05 PM
Originally posted by HapZungLam
I hope she "doesn't" has clothes on tho :p :drool:

holy shit she is TEN years old! ;)

Daniel
11-24-2002, 10:18 PM
Very nice heat/face!!! :buttrock:

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BUT "HapZungLam" be carefull with the stuff U write :shame:

but I never laught that much...Yeah Mannnn she is Ten...May U read Teen could that be ;)

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hehe...Cya.

HapZungLam
11-25-2002, 06:20 PM
Originally posted by Daniel
BUT "HapZungLam" be carefull with the stuff U write :shame:

but I never laught that much...Yeah Mannnn she is Ten...May U read Teen could that be ;)

oh come on Daniel. its just a joke.

Daniel
11-25-2002, 06:53 PM
that#s why I laugh :p

hehe :drool:

Cya.

Spady
11-26-2002, 07:08 AM
Here's a little update (well, it's not that much of an update)
The body is more or less complete but you won't see it until she has clothes on it :)


http://spady.free.fr/Wip/May%205.jpg

Daniel
11-26-2002, 09:16 AM
Can U tell US something about the anim U wanna make?:bounce:

Cya.

Fenrir
11-26-2002, 02:15 PM
haha HapZungLam's a pervert :scream:

greyt model :beer:

how about 3d-eyelashes?

oracle
11-29-2002, 12:58 AM
Looks great... bored alien beat me to it when he said that it looked like Hitomi. This is also due to the fact that this model's right up there with DOA's quality of models.

Excellent work so far :thumbsup: Keep it up.

fireman
11-29-2002, 02:53 AM
:applause: :applause: :applause: excellent work!!

PsychedelicMind
11-29-2002, 03:13 AM
Will the cuteness never end? :D Man she's so kawaii! :love:

piajartist
11-29-2002, 05:20 AM
love the lips

Spady
12-27-2002, 12:46 AM
Here's an update. The modeling is almost complete, only the hands are left to be refined...

http://spady.free.fr/Wip/may%20Test%20Skinning%20c5.jpg
http://spady.free.fr/Wip/may%20Test%20Skinning%20c6.jpg

jfalconer
12-27-2002, 01:18 AM
No stars yet, huh? thats damned near blasphemous... this is (almost) Final Fantasy X quality work here... great stuff!

:bowdown:

Stratobrain
12-27-2002, 01:21 AM
Looks really great!! Can't wait to see your short!! (When do you expect to......well... show us a first frame or alike? Can't wait :bounce: :bounce: )

BlindFish
12-27-2002, 01:52 AM
i'm also waiting for your short ! and these aquarel things :)

BiTMAP
12-27-2002, 03:28 AM
people like you, are waht people like me, strive to be! (wow that sorta rhymes) thats is an EXCILLENT model!

Manicalavera15
12-27-2002, 04:04 AM
Ohhh...really clean,
"hey tenageer, wanna come wit' me? i've something big to show u.":drool:

clothes are wonderfull, lips "MIAM":scream:

one crit : hair's "japan style" seems little static, what about reallistic polygonal hair? (or some plug in to simulate them)

keep the good work, wanna see her talk to me and say next time "oh manicalavera, come into me :p "

hiko_
12-27-2002, 06:27 AM
I want to see your short !
You are so sexy with your smalll short on the beach !

BiTMAP
12-27-2002, 07:21 AM
I like how the hair is, I think it would look kinda neat to see some super thin loos hairs (you know how hair is, you never get it all) sticking out and such... Just would be an amazing touch I think.

fireman
12-27-2002, 07:28 AM
WOWOWOWOW!! jus seen the update.... very :drool: mmmmm
very impressive work Spady! :thumbsup:

anthalis
10-23-2004, 07:46 PM
good model and really nice face ! :)

estevez
10-25-2004, 05:07 PM
[QUOTE=Spady]http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/8533/10_yr_old_large_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/8533/10_yr_old_large.jpg)

Really a beautiful modeling and excellent textures and light. Congratulations !

TETRAGRAMMATON
07-21-2005, 10:29 PM
Fine, fine subject.Lovely model.

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