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11-01-2005, 12:46 AM
My entry into the current CgChat comp.
11-01-2005, 12:58 AM
like your character design. she looks relly odd from the side vew though. It makes her look way to thick. Also, I think I would scale down her spear thingy to the size you have in the image. It just looks likes you accidentally made the wrong size since is so insanely huge compared to the chick.
i think she looks great. and her side perspective view & shape also. doesnt look fat, only natural :D
face is gorgeous.
11-01-2005, 01:46 AM
looks killer dude.... GREAT JOB!
11-01-2005, 02:02 AM
You know, a real Amazon would be -1 breast. :eek:
Supposedly easier to shoot a bow that way.
J/K, very good work. (but the above note IS true!)
11-01-2005, 04:12 AM
I love your concept, and the models great too!
my only crits would be that you should add the red on the concepts face...it looks cool!
and that the spear looks too big in the final....not so much size as proportion.
it looks too much like a normal sized design that was scaled up instead of something that was thought out to be that big.
Im loving the oversized weapon! animation bonanzaaaaaah!! :bounce:
any specific background on the 4 toes deal? :twisted:
11-01-2005, 11:12 AM
Gotta agree that spear is massive, cool tho!! Nice overall job on her with great modelling and texture work!
11-01-2005, 12:27 PM
Very nice model, but i think i like most the eye color in the concept (wich keeps me remind of Boti Bliss (CSI miami agent Valera) dunno why...)
Good luck for the contest
11-02-2005, 05:42 AM
Nice job man!
Gonna have to agree a tad on the weapon, nothin wrong with testin the limits ;) . Also seem like her thighs may be a tad large. well exicuted man.
11-02-2005, 08:59 PM
This is way cool Ghost.
For those of you going on about the spear.....it's in the Brief...man no one reads briefs anymore :P.
Shame what happened about your desk?
11-03-2005, 08:38 AM
Id bone her
11-03-2005, 08:48 AM
I'm really digging those big ..... and she has such a cute face :drool: excellent job man!
:cry: I'm so sad I missed this cgchat competition I was really waiting for a do like it, BUT THEN! too busy with cruddy freelance work.
11-03-2005, 05:11 PM
Meh, dont really care for your reason the spear is large, still dont like it. Its twice as big as in the concept and if she even swung that spear it would break in half. Model looks good though..
11-03-2005, 06:27 PM
Nice, Ghost. Good luck with the comp. Your character's proportions in your final mesh remind me of Frazzeta's amazon characters. Nice job capturing that look.
Great texture work from you, as always. :)
11-03-2005, 06:31 PM
Slick work Ghost!!...but...damn!!...those eyes have me mesmerised...I'm hoping to see her posed...she desrerves something dynamic....good luck with the comp aswell...:thumbsup:
11-29-2005, 02:16 AM
Finished up the contest, AND WON! Here are the final images. Thought I would pimp them here.
11-29-2005, 03:23 AM
That's awesome... but it looks as if she lost a toe swinging that weapon. I count 4. :}
Unless of course that was deliberate; an Amazonian ritual, perhaps? :)
You did a great job with the model. Congrats!
11-29-2005, 07:23 AM
Amaising work there. Love the textures.
I just noticed that she has 4 toes on each foot. Any reason for this?
11-29-2005, 10:55 AM
Chicks with 4 toes are hot. 4 toes is the new botox. ;p
11-29-2005, 11:34 AM
Chicks with 4 toes are hot. 4 toes is the new botox. ;p
Quite obviously you've done ya research...and that is why she won! :D...seriously tho'...good job and congrats on the win....
11-29-2005, 03:33 PM
Nice, josh! What is this now, like 3 comps you've won on cgchat?!
Your the king, man..
11-29-2005, 04:04 PM
Thanks Johnwoo, The whole 4 toes thing was seriously an oversight. Heh I was doing some pretty heavy crunch at work when I did this. Also the reason I put "comp #19" in there when it was actually #30! hahahah
Podman: Thanks man. I enter these contest as much as a can, But this is the first one Ive won! hahah. Im glad you think Im teh Kingzorxxx 4 teh win.
11-29-2005, 11:26 PM
i like her.
first i saw your concept i thought, arghh, thats a similar amazon girl im planing to do since some month now. but in difference to me you have made her in 3d and that not bad.
im loving your concept even better than the finsihed model. everything fits better and i like the red and blue dots you put on her that are missing in the model.
her exotique touch is another thing im liking.
some points for crit:
- the profil of her face doesnt fit very well to her front view. they look like two different faces.
- her hip is very wide. i would say - she looks fat in that area. a smaller hip would give her a better breast, waist, hip ratio.
- in comparison to her wide hip she has a very small butt. looks more like she has tensing her buttmuscles. you can see it good in your amapose2_1, where the butt is missing. instead of a nice silhouette you have i hole in this area.
- it isnt very plausible that you have given her make up. why should an amazon girl use eyeshadow and lipstick? for a more believable character you should leave such unfitting things. just for an optical effect it isnt worth to ruin the characters world. maybe im just becoming too old for this kind of shallow charms :)
if it was your intention just to make an amazon chick, than ok....but so you are loosing the interesting aspect she could have and it will be reduced to the same as all the pin ups around the world.
- some colourvariation would be nice. your texturework is very monochromatic. discreet colourvariations will make the stuff more lively and interesting....no matter if it is skin or clothmaterial
hope some of the points can be of help and i havent talked too much nonsense.....
11-30-2005, 08:31 PM
That isn't fat. That is a wonderfully curved lady, with powerful legs that will propel her fast through the jungle. I love the way her figure looks.
There are only one thing I'm not too sure about. I can go for the fishnet stockings, but I would have liked to have seen some wear and tear in them.
Anyway, beautiful, and wonderful take on the female figure – I feel she is very convincing as an amazon.
12-01-2005, 01:48 AM
Awh! I think she's beautiful. She isn't fat at all, she's very womanly. Sorry guys, but I don't think the skinny chicks that society accepts as the correct weight (I'm not fat so don't crack on me.. lol) wouldn't be able to fight like a woman of these proportions could. I kinda miss the teal stone accents on the straps across her stomach on the pre-pro that didn't make it into the final textures. I think she's awesome, tho. Lovely chick, and yeah I know the weapon was needed for the contest but dang that's cheesy.
12-01-2005, 07:02 PM
hehe, i would not have imagine that others think so - i thought its obvious :)
maybe i was a bit misunderstood and should explain it more.
i dont like thin woman at all, some nice curves on the right areas are much better than just skin around bones. but if curves, than everywhere where they belong and dont just on on area. the proportion to the whole body has to be harmonious - then every bodytype (thin, fat or normal) is nice and sexy in general.
but i see in the hip/upper thigh area a balloon (inside as well as outside). anatomically i dont know, what it should be than fat concentrating on just this one spot.
it cant be a muscular thigh cause a big sidemuscle would go deeper to the kneearea and not look like a ballon in the upper part and than disappear on his way to the knee.
if i look on her sideview, i see a different leg. i have learned that normally the leg is a bit wider from side than front view.
and in comparison to the other leg parts it looks very extrem. she has very thin knees and lower legs - for me it is more than strange/ unproportional.
if her legs, waist and breast areas would be thicker, it would better fit.
but if others dont think so, then ok....iŽll have to learn much more about taste than just the theoretic part of proportions and harmony.
12-01-2005, 07:58 PM
great model ghost, congrats on winning. Firm and fruity all the way!
12-02-2005, 01:10 AM
that is a great model
very nice work
12-02-2005, 01:43 AM
But, just a small thing, the 7th shot of her shows the abdominal area and the straps look rather flat in that area, maybe you could pull out the center verts more forward a bit?
12-02-2005, 01:43 AM
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