Still Life: Angel House

[Dr BeN]

looks nice ... but a few crits ..


1. do something with the ... arg my enlish is soo bad "kamin" in german .. ;) erm chimney ? the thing of the house where the smoke comes out you know :)

2. the background (lake with hills) looks like a plane with a picture made with bryce or terragen in it ? (is it ?)

3. I think the house is too bright ..

what i really like are those fuzzy refelctions of the water .. that looks great

the yellow flowers look odd too even more than the red one ... normally if u have i very strong color .... when its further behind in a scene the colors blend into the other colors ... but for the red flowers at the back ... their color is tooo strong

but anyway i ejoyed watching this image ;)

:D

[YYM]

Thanks a lot!

[HapZungLam]

everything looks great, just some of the proportion taht you need to concentrade on. (the house is way too small, compare to the with of the grass).

Maybe you should change the colour of your light too. it is not sun light colour.

[facial]

Hey, man, somerhing is shining in your image, Good, Keep post more,:bounce:

[frye]

Great work, how many polys total?

I think the proportions are fine. I can tell that it is more of a "feild grass" than a "lawn grass."

[dark_lotus]

Its much to bright, you need to really darken it. (Auto Contrast in Photoshop).

And yes the chimney is in desperate need of attention.

[verti]

yeah... it's too bright... i would try making it darker and adding a little bloom effect?

anyway... kewl render. lemme hug the angle :drool:

what software? how did u make the grass? and trees? really nice...

keep up the good work!

verti.
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