PDA

View Full Version : Idling, Raymond Stoops (3D)

Raydude
10-28-2005, 07:55 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/179555/179555_1130529346_medium.jpg

Title: Idling
Name: Raymond Stoops
Country: Netherlands
Software: LightWave 3D, Photoshop

Hi, i'm working on a few images i can show when i apply to the art course i want to do.
For my first image i decided to combine some technical modelling with a simple scene. I had some difficulties establishing the lighting, so suggestions on that area will be much appreciated. Ofcourse, any critique or comments you can spare are welcome, as improving is quite high up on my 'to do' list ;)
Cheers!

edit: added link to high res image

>> Hi resolution image << (http://home.wanadoo.nl/jjstoops/Idling_web_cred.jpg)
Dagibit
10-28-2005, 09:57 PM
Train model's detail is very good- Looks nice:thumbsup: I think it could use a few more buildings though (not that the avarage person would notice;) ).
blz
10-28-2005, 11:01 PM
very nice model, i agree that the environment is quite empty, but thats a detail.
i like it, well done work
congratz
AmpedDigital
10-29-2005, 08:15 AM
i love the train dude looks really nice the lighting could be fixed up a lil tho :) great work
pagadesign
10-29-2005, 04:20 PM
models are perfect, but in this work scants dirt map!! however good job :bounce:
Raydude
10-30-2005, 05:37 PM
Thank you for the kind comments, i'll remember to paint some dirt maps for the models in my next image :)
mnt
10-30-2005, 06:20 PM
I think this piece is perfect especially the train model, and it parts, but the Train texture is too clean to me, as if I'm see it in the factory not at service,
also you may add some environmental objects, and frankly I couldn't tell if this is a new age kind of trains or old one,
very good work keep it up.
cenkkara
10-30-2005, 07:38 PM
good work!
lusong
10-31-2005, 03:19 PM
The train model is very well,the detail is so clear ,:) :applause:
CGTalk Moderation
10-31-2005, 03:19 PM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.