Final Duel, Monsit Jangariyawong (3D)

[Lamster]

oh man it looks great! It has a very epic feel :)


I don't really like the horse though, i feel it's a little stumpy and not long enough, maybe it's because of the huge head armor.

The rest of the picture is great indeed :)

[nachogrande]

Stunning work as always.

[chrisjbuck]

Very nice!

I think the human has a bit of a disadvantage. :surprised
I can't decide if he's about to be decapitated by the demon's sword or by the demon's mount's big maw.

[aesir]

While technically it has a TON of great aspects to it, the composition needs some work. When I first looked at it, I was VERY confused about what was going on. I didn't even notice the horse until I really concentrated on looking for it. There is too much shiny stuff which grabs your eye automatically, that I don't even notice things like the horses body (it really blends into the background and the dragon), nor am I able to quickly grasp the man's pose.

What your image needs is a stronger focal point. Whether you achieve this with different lighting or adjusting contrast and what not in photoshop, it hardly matters. Right now, its just really busy and I have trouble taking it all in at once.

[Hisaichi-Taniguchi]

Oh,my! It's a splendid picture! It remembered Eugene Delacroix's picture.

[davesteel]

Je, He is the winner man, any critiques isn´t matter anyway.

[Maxko]

Hey buddy,

really incredible piece of work!!

[techwarp]

just one word for you:amazing!great work indeed.congratulations!:thumbsup:

[monsitj]

many thanks for comments and critiques ! I always glad to recieve your comments for improve ! thanks again in advance:bounce:

[authentic]

What to say monsijt ?? That's freakig impresive. It must have been an hard job to place everything in space without too much penetrations.
I like the whole picture, texture of metal, designs and depth of field.
If I had 2 crit (just because it's the aim of the forum because I'm totally unable to do uch picture :scream:), I would say 2 things. 1st I had some time to completely understand the picture. THe horse is specially difficult to read maybe because of his color or contrast with the metal and also because of the motion blur on his front legs; But it gaves an impression of mess which is good for a battle.
2nd the wrap of the bad guy seems very heavy for me and takes a bizarre place in the picture.

Again :applause:

[vanda]

Superb modelling and render.Congrats:applause:

[AmpedDigital]

wow hell of a picture but as said before the horse is really hard to distinguish i had to look at it for 2 minutes before realising the horse is there :D other then that its excellent

[blz]

awesome piece
superb modelling, nice texturing.
good dynamics
congratulations, impressive stuff

[rawwad]

Hey, man! This is excellent :applause:

Fantastic design of characters and great movie action. Keep it up! :thumbsup:

[Henrique Naspolini]

Wow .... great modeling and render too, :applause:
I just not like the expressions :shrug:
but Great great work

[Sollesnes]

Yeah, the horse was a bit hard to see at first, but still, stunning work. Just great. :)

[Simon Matush]

Great work, very impressive, but the right bottom side on the picture is a little bit chaotic.

Piece, great :thumbsup:

[Dagibit]

Very nice- I can almost feel the collision! great job!:applause:

[sande]

Very nice modelling and lot of details but the composition ruins what could have been a great image... Different elements blend together too much and there is nothing to really focus on, which makes the image chaotic and tiresome to look at.

Both characters seem to look at weird directions, which doesn't help the composition. It makes the image look like there is two completely separate shots just thrown together.

Great modelling though. :)

[Akoa]

Awsome work. If I had to crit one thing it would be the big guys eyes are looking off into space, it might be a bit better if he was looking at his target. Again, amazing work.

[Pikmin]

Very impressive for the detail. My only critic is, its hard to understant what going on there. Beside that, its very cool. We can feel the action.

[rblitz7]

Wow everything is so awesome in this pic! Great job!:scream:

[ROWAN]

how do you find the time to make this enter both the comps and still produce amazing work you totally mad great work

[morphar]

Oh my, absolute class A work!

Love the dynamic in the scene, stunning work :thumbsup:

[ashena145]

great work man!

five stars from me.

[gardogg]

I've never even heard of deathfall.com until just this week. Did you just go there for this challenge or do you regularly participate in their forums and community as well as this one?

[rayman2k2]

Excellent modelling and rendering. Facial expression could be better and have more sense of urgency. :applause:

[lildragon]

While technically it has a TON of great aspects to it, the composition needs some work. When I first looked at it, I was VERY confused about what was going on. I didn't even notice the horse until I really concentrated on looking for it. There is too much shiny stuff which grabs your eye automatically, that I don't even notice things like the horses body (it really blends into the background and the dragon), nor am I able to quickly grasp the man's pose.


Quoted for agreement, I had a hard time sorting out where the knight and Dragon's leg begins and ends. Technically sound, but the composition needs quite a bit of work.

And for added crits, if this is indeed a "final duel" that means these guys are the two bad asses on the battlefield, there's no way their attire would be so clean and spotless at this point in battle, where's the blood? dings/scratches? torn clothes? :)

-lild

[monsitj]

whoa! many thanks for all of your comments ! yes I agree about composition , but i don't notice that until recieve your comments because i see it at the first step from modeling to texture , so I know what goin on in the scene , heheh it's a good lesson for me to show WIP to orther people with fresh eye to comments! thanks again !

gardogg : hi ! glad you visit my thread man! I visited deathfall for a long time but don't participate too much , because their base language in forum is not english , but there are english forum in there ! deathfall is very great site with news ,tutorial and more ! great place to visit regularly.
lildragon : yeah ! I agree , torn cloth would be cool! thanks ! and I'm glad you visit my thread ! , I follow your post from very first of cgtalk!

[Pooyag]

that's awsome monsit! Great work.:thumbsup:

[Purc]

F*ckin hell.. Thats an awesome picture man. Should be a nice poster though !

[Reivaj]

Hi monsit, Congratulations for winning the Death Fall Contest, your work is incredibly good!

[Rysh]

very beautiful work! The battle feel perfect!
Good luck in challenge!

[Bleen]

5 stars from me... it gave me shivers :thumbsup:

[Tilstrom]

good work, nice modelling and texturing. :thumbsup:

[floclau]

it looks really nice , but the metal armor seems 2 massive looks 2 heavy its like metal blocks on them

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