painting:girl with guns

[Flakktrooper]

I like this a lot. For no aparent reason I thought of "Run Lola Run" when I saw it. The texture of the color is different, but good. I dont know if I like how her teeth look, but it gives her a sort of trashy street girl look.

[Neil]

I always wonder if people want critiques or just feedback. If it's a painting, it's kind of hard to reposition stuff without redoing it all.
I only say this because the perspective of her left arm going from the shoulder to the wrist seems too far out, unlike the right arm, which looks better.

[dedmann]

thanks Flakktrooper you just resumed in simple sentences what i wanted to project in this painting and it's really cool to hear feedback like this!

thanks again!

Hey Neil even though we dont know each other it's great that you took some of your time to critique my art and your right i thought about it too when i was doing it but i didn't want my painting to be exactly the same on both sides (fully centered)so did her with one arm not exactly pointing the same way as the other.

i don't like doing symetrical stuff:shame:

thanks for your input Neil greatly appreciated!

Dedmann

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