Character: Spiderman WIP

[ShiroiOokami]

Not bad so far, my critique would be on the upper leg area, it looks elongated. Some other views and wires may help get more critiques.

[Bapsis]

Yeah, its the legs that i've been struggling with. Here is another shot and a couple of wireframes, hope that helps.

Matt


http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d48matt/sm_2.jpg
http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d48matt/smwf1.jpg
http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d48matt/smwf2.jpg

[Bapsis]

Hey all,

Thought i would post more WIP shots, worked on the legs and a few other things that ppl commented (he has less spideypoutch now). :)

Let me know what you think, am going to keep tweaking until i get it right....

Cheers,

Matt

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d48matt/smu1.jpg
http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d48matt/smu2.jpg

[admiraligor]

Awsome :) Looks like a great start! Only little thing I really see wrong with it is that on the real thing, the muscles are a little more pronounced, and on the bottom of the boot (for the lack of a better word) It's much flatter; so that it has more traction on the ground. Other than those little nitpicks, looks like a very nice start :)

[reedomatic01]

Nice start. Spiderman is one of those guys that seems a bit difficult to critique because so much of his character is in his poses. Most of the anatomy seems cool, I would say that his legs look a little heavy on the polys on the sides, and the feet look a little thick on the top. Keep up the good work.

[Raizler]

Hi there. That's a great looking model, but I just have a minor problem.
Spiderman's webbing on the arms is backwards. The biceps are supposed to
be blue and the triceps have the red webbing. Here's a link to help you see
what I mean:

http://spiderman-web.com/spiderman/teamups.htm

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