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sarNz
10-15-2005, 12:54 AM
Hey guys, I lost my hard drive and now that i got it back I decided to do some wacom painting. This is supposed to be a cartoony style of a girl just sitting on a beach (obviously) I know that something is wrong with the position, but im not sure what it really is. I need to finish that area of the hair, and basically learn how to paint everything. I would just like to know what you guys think and how I could correct the position. Thanks for any comments!
Noiram
10-15-2005, 03:08 PM
Hi sarNz
The colours in your piece are nice but the drawing needs some work.
Here are a few things to consider
Perspective, have a look a her buttocks. Objects receed to the horizon.
Her shoulders seem dislocated the are to out from the body
How much water is she sitting in? If the surf is just coming in you should see her feet.
Why is she wearing a jacket and sitting in the water?
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