WIP critique/comments on composition

[Ilikesoup]

A very cool idea and an interesting perspective. Odd, though, that the horizon line is at a slant but the tower in the background is a straight vertical line -- it should be perpendicular to the ground. Might also want to turn the center ball of the snitch so it's axis aligns with the wings.

Looking forward to updates. :)

[multiVitamin]

@Ilikesoup: thanks for the advice!

so here it is a little update. mainly reworked the sky and the cape. oh and added something like a banner to the towers. I will paint some ornament/logo stuff onto them later. now I will try to concentrate on his "armor".

so hope you like it!

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/sirmultivitamin/snitch_04.jpg

[multiVitamin]

here we go, another update.

tried to fix several things with proportions and added detail to the "armor".. ah and not to forget, reworked the snitch :)

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/sirmultivitamin/snitch_05.jpg

[multiVitamin]

another update :)

ah and crits are welcome ;)

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/sirmultivitamin/snitch_06.jpg

[teal-k]

that's a great picture multivitamin , still i like the first picture best
there are some perspective errors and something's wrong with the guy's anatomy
dont know looks too small to me, there is too much blue for my taste <blue is my favorite color> its too distracting

keep it up :thumbsup:

[multiVitamin]

didn't have so much time the last few weeks, so here we go another update

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/sirmultivitamin/snitch_07.jpg

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