Griffioen

[Factotum]

Nice work-- but that fine specimen of mythology seems to be posed a little awkward.

The emerging castle in the clouds is wonderful, it's mysterious-- an image that immeadiately demmands attention. However, your griffin (the spelling variations indicate origins, griffin is Celtic medieval themed and the gryphon is Greek classical, either spelling works) seems disinterested almost irritated and bored by the view.

Maybe his pose should be more upright if its a guardian figure, or more sinister if it plans on attacking the castle-- right now, I don't know its intentions. So please, before you put in anymore detail, consider the reasoning behind the pose, and render the illustration accordingly.:D

[joey-b]

Thx allot i finsihed the piece already.. (hope this works)

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y260/b-yeoj/Griffin.jpg

and i did fix the pose a bit more standing up as u said
changed the whole colors of the thing to more earthy like
hope its any good

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