View Full Version : WIP: Head Crit
10-11-2005, 12:12 AM
i wanted to show my old-new head. The first pic is a recent head i made, which has some shapes and poly flow i like, but its still buggy.
the second one is more optimized and i tried to delete polys not describing a area necessary.
i wonder if any of those is good and id appreciate to hear some crits.
oh and ye in the second one the eyes look weird, perhaps i have to push them in a bit more
10-11-2005, 02:47 PM
Heads are really hard aren't they? Still, what you've done isn't bad at all, though I do agree with you that the eyes need to be pushed back a little.
For some reason your model reminds me of the 'Muranon Tutorial Head (http://www.muranon.com/axel/character/tutorial_1/index.html)'. I don't know if you have this tutorial or if you're following it, but I think it might help you:
10-11-2005, 02:54 PM
I think this mesh looks pretty darn good. For the low poly count you have captured the details needed in an efficent manner.
10-11-2005, 03:23 PM
Looks pretty good to me.
I think the face itself may be too tall. His eyes should be a bit lower, which would squish everything else down a wee bit.
His nose/upper lip seems a bit odd from the side, but that's just general preference.
10-11-2005, 03:34 PM
i agree about upper lip, although it could just be a weak chin, if you wanrt togo for a stronger jaw just move the lower lip chin forwrds a wee bit.
The ear seems to be too far ahead of the jaw. It's more like this from someone else's model on this forum.
10-11-2005, 05:10 PM
wow thanks peeps for the great crits
the head is indeed tall i just considered :D
no Pesky i didnt follow the tut, but thanks for the link.
ill try to modify the head to all of your crits, thanks again.
10-11-2005, 10:30 PM
well ive done some corrections but .. im just a too big coward to make extreme changes ^^
i might have to push the changes a bit more into obviousness (i dont think thats an english word :P)
edit: oh i see i need to make a before/after pic -.-
10-11-2005, 10:38 PM
Great work there buddy ^^
The only thing that strikes me is the forehead. Can't quite put my finger on it, but just have a feeling that something is amiss in that region. A tad bit too round perhaps? Or maybe the slope should be more gradual... I'm not really helping, am I? =P
Ahwell, maybe it'll help someone else pinpoint the problem... ;P Again, great work ^^
10-11-2005, 10:42 PM
hehe well maybe the edited-in wireframe helps you to pinpoint the problem, i lowered it a bit. i think it should be more straight at first .. dunno
just for the record, the model formerly (sorry for that word) was a jack sparrow likeness attempt.. which was modified. the textures where just some cuttogethers and .. no unwrap done just planar map ^^ old pic.. too much self illum ..
10-11-2005, 10:42 PM
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