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DKScully
02-25-2002, 07:18 PM
critics and comments wellcome

Thank you

Pedro
02-25-2002, 11:41 PM
(I'm assuming this was created digitally)

The shading is good, I think that's a strong point. However, the composition is a bit strange, and something seems off, perhaps it's the perspective of the arm.

I think you need to focus a bit more in the shape of the arm and the muscles. Also, the boxing gloves seem a bit too round(but I'm not an expert in that, so...)

The face does give a sense of "pain", but the totally black eyes and the almost "smiling" mouth seem like wasted opportunities to give more impact. However, face expressions are probably the hardest thing to draw, so don't get discouraged.

Btw, the coloring seems good to me, perhaps add a little more "texture" to the gloves? You know, how they are made of a leatherish material...

DKScully
02-25-2002, 11:57 PM
Thank you very much.

I have to care the perspectives. I don't use references and I should กกกกก

I like shading...

I think I have to work more to improve myself but it's funny post images.

Thank you.

paranoy2k
02-26-2002, 08:28 AM
I really like the style of your character...
It's a cool pic you've made here!

Good work!

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