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unrespected
10-10-2005, 10:30 PM
I have been working on this animation for awhile now. Any critiques would be great-

http://www.unrespected.com/animation/box.avi

GuzzaBee
10-11-2005, 09:35 AM
It's all looking very nice, the only thing that 'might' need looking at is the land from the jump back; you've got him landing on one foot and very quickly changing direction without any follow through. If you want to keep the speed you may be able to add some reaction to the limbs or offset the keys on that pose, but at the moment he's hitting the pose hard with a sudden change in direction.


From an acting point of view you could always go on to add little touches here and there, tapping the box as he looks around & double takes as he walks off, but thats a bit more subjective.

Hope this helps

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