Spectacular 3D Entry: saw takeyama

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1128622468_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1128622468_large.jpg)

It is a scene of which the elderly person is boasting.

[Lovas]

Interesting sketch! I'm aware that it is too early for comments in this sketch phase - but the child face in the corner is distracting since it is looking in the wrong direction and it represents an area of interest that is too close to the borders of the image and too far from the main area of interest - that might mean bad composition - unless you have very strong reasons in your concept for it. Line of sight of a person is in general a very important psychological composition line - use them smartly to improve the impact of your image on observers...

[saw]

Big D thanks for the good response.:)
I think about two or more people's compositions.
It corrects it in the next image.

thanks

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1128867034_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1128867034_large.jpg)

The composition was changed.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129049410_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129049410_large.jpg)

modeling,rendering: Lightwave3d

[danielkenobi]

could you write a little more about your idea? I dont get it. The modeling of the face looks good though. Are u using the other parts as base to the model? ot just for this renders and get proportions?

[saw]

Hi,danielkenobi
Thank you for a valuable opinion.

Left one is an image to check the proportions. Right one is an image that begins the modeling of the head.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129141910_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129141910_large.jpg)

Oldmans haed model update.
Details of the head were sculptured.

continue....

[danielkenobi]

I like the model of the face, actually I was looking more for an explanation of what is the point of your image, I mean "It is a scene of which the elderly person is boasting" I dont get what boasting mean, and even when I look for the translation to my natural language. Could you explain a little more your image.

[saw]

Hi,danielkenobi
sorry it made a mistake in the meaning of your message.

The elderly person is having children hear his wonderful past adventure as a story.

Its adventure is ....
I don't know(^^).

It is a walking stick that the elderly person has.
It might be a talk when something is killed with the gun.
You also must imagine it...

thank you

[DaddyMack]

Hey there saw, I like your concept man! and the mesh is off to a fine start... In particular I like the eyelid droop... Good luck!

[saw]

Hi,DaddyMack

Thank you for a reply.:)
It is very glad to like the eyelid droop.

However, it is likely to disappear by the angle in the final image. (^^);

thank you!

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129231088_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129231088_large.jpg)

low poly models

I am hesitating in designing the chair .

Please teach the site that serves as a reference to me.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129483037_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129483037_large.jpg)

boy model update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129484722_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129484722_large.jpg)

I started rough modeling of BG.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129485478_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129485478_large.jpg)

plan of boys clothes

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129574748_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129574748_large.jpg)

Started modeling the girl.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129663000_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129663000_large.jpg)

Oldman's hand modeling

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129774125_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129774125_large.jpg)

oldman's shoes modeling...

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129861846_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1129861846_large.jpg)

oldman model update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130183402_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130183402_large.jpg)

The environment was changed.

[glenn23]

I Like your concept.
Which is more spectacular, the event or the memory of the event? The child on the right definitely seems to think the old man's story is spectacular.

[saw]

Hi,glenn23

Thank you for a reply.

The story of the experience of the senior person is interesting.
but
Elderly person's story often becomes BIG SCALE.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130352481_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130352481_large.jpg)

The girl is interested in other some one.

[Digital_Rebellion]

Hello Saw, welcome to the challenge. I like the concept - it offers different perspectives of spectacular from the girl & the boy'a point of view, as they are paying attention to diff. things.

[saw]

Hi,Digital_Rebellion
Thank you for the comment.

It is glad to like for the concept.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130440965_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130440965_large.jpg)

boy's pants modeling.

[SergioSantos]

Very good modeling!
I really like this trouser (wrinkles are amazing!)

excellent job!

[saw]

Hi,Sergio Santos

Thank you for the comment.

ZBRUSH had been used for modeling, it was not difficult.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130704225_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1130704225_large.jpg)

cat modeling started

[makaron]

really like your work :thumbsup:

[saw]

Hi,makaron

Thank you for a comment.
It is glad to like for my work.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131039220_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131039220_large.jpg)

girl and more model update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131048771_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131048771_large.jpg)

oldman's shirts model update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131191319_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131191319_large.jpg)

oldman's shirts model update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131302072_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131302072_large.jpg)

girl's cloth model update.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131308161_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131308161_large.jpg)

Room model update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131393773_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131393773_large.jpg)

BG Model Update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131393929_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131393929_large.jpg)

girl's cloth model update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131482252_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131482252_large.jpg)

girl's hair test

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131565703_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131565703_large.jpg)

Boy's cloth model update.
Sculpt by ZBrush

[authentic]

Posing, lighting and clothes are impressive. Congratulations.

[makaron]

this make me think that violence or big gestures not always have to be the most spectacular thing, little sweet innocent things can be just as spectacular :)
like your contraste in the image, the hunters story against the kittens sweetness... :thumbsup:

[saw]

HI,authentic Thanks man!:thumbsup:


Hi,makaron Thanks man!:thumbsup:

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131866875_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131866875_large.jpg)

girl's hair test2

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131907960_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131907960_large.jpg)

Oldman's pants update

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131994086_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1131994086_large.jpg)

Start Texturing.
I will draws the wrinkle more.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132250105_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132250105_large.jpg)

Face texture & hair setting

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132426878_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132426878_large.jpg)

Boy's hair & Lighting test

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132513104_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132513104_large.jpg)

Boy's Modeling,Lighting & texturing
modeling: Eye,Eyebrow
texturing: Eye,Face

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132605843_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132605843_large.jpg)

Texturing & Lighting test

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132625240_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132625240_large.jpg)

Resize Head
Eyebrow modeling

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132692457_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132692457_large.jpg)

girl modeling update
&
Lighting test

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132862725_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1132862725_large.jpg)

Modeling:Socks

[gwhite206]

Looking good, the only thing bugging me is she has no toes.

[saw]

gwhite206.....Thank you for comment

Because she is putting on socks, the toes is not seen.

[harryb]

I can't believe I didn't see this thread earlier. Your work is fantastic and your composition is right on! I can't wait to see the lighting and shading.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133043570_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133043570_large.jpg)

Lighting test Boy

[saw]

harryb... Thank you for comment.
I start the Lighting and Shading.

[rawwad]

I see great working here! I like idea very much, reminds me my grandfather :D , characters looks fantastic. I look foward to see final image! :thumbsup:

[gardogg]

I like your modeling and hair. Good work!

[saw]

rawwad... Thank you for comment.

gardogg... Thank you for comment.

Please Look again Later.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133123198_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133123198_large.jpg)

Lighting test Oldman
Modeling Belt etc..

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133207891_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133207891_large.jpg)

Lighting test Girl

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133281017_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133281017_large.jpg)

Low resolution Compositing test

[Gunilla]

Your chracters have a real good expression and poses - great work!
Have you skipped the idea of having them outdoors? The sketch iwth them placed under the tree was really good.
Good luck for finalizing this wonderful piece :thumbsup:

[saw]

Hi,Gunilla thank you for comment.

I also thought that the outside was better first.
However, it came to want to decorate the room with an old photograph later.

[makaron]

you done great lately... :bounce: it´s a really nice mood in this image... and waiting to see the rest of the room come together...

[saw]

makaron Thank you:)

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133380849_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133380849_large.jpg)

Phorograph when Elderly person was young.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133466860_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133466860_large.jpg)

Tree at Garden.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133560633_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133560633_large.jpg)

Lighting cat & Ball

[makaron]

aww.. this kitten is so cute :) I really to see the whole image soon...

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133633734_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133633734_large.jpg)

Compositing test

[saw]

Hi makaron. Thanks man.:)

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133727887_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133727887_large.jpg)

Compositing......

[raultabajara]

Very nice concept!
The storyteller!
inner ion the house is very better - the picture in the wall tell much tings about the grandfather story

[Grorum]

Beautifull, espcially the way you takes 'Spectacular' from a Child' point of view.
Great work saw. :thumbsup:

[claudiojordao]

Hey saw,
It's an incredible pleasure to flip the pages of your fantastic thread man.
Congratulations for your amazing work, and good luck.

[saw]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133818131_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/11/9202/9202_1133818131_large.jpg)

story:
The elderly person is telling children an old story on the afternoon
of a certain day.
The boy is very interested in the talk.
but The girl seems to be bored, and to be interested in other things.

[dandan]

excelent work, nice and clean. i like the lighting conditions a lot.. hehe, and that cat is awesome :)

[saw]

Hi,Raul Tabajara Thanx for comment.
Hi, Grorum Thanx for comment.
Hi, claudio_jordao Thanx for comment.

:)

[saw]

Hi,dan0891 Thanx for comment. ;)

[makaron]

spectacular mood... :bounce:

[saw]

Hi, makaron Thanx for comment.:)

[Gunilla]

Wonderful work - congratulations and good luck! :thumbsup:

[saw]

Hi,Gunilla, Thanks!:)

[jddog]

a spectacular story... wonderful image... congratulations... :applause:
jdd

[saw]

Hi,jddog. Thank you.:)

[aliasali]

:thumbsup: very good execution,i loved the mood!..

[saw]

Hi,Madlight_1988
Thank you.:thumbsup:

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