Spectacular 2D Entry: kazım doku

[Vectorius]

Welcome Kazim and good luck for the challenge.:)

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1127941624_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1127941624_large.jpg)

This is the first concept of the race cars

[emrahelmasli]

Welcome and good luck brother! Nice start.
I hope you keep it up.

(Hemen caymak yok ona gore.) :)

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1127978361_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1127978361_large.jpg)

race car

[MVDB]

Pretty awesome bike so far, like it! :)
Keep it up

[anilduran]

hi bro,
it's really good to see you in challenge.
nice vehicle design like mad max...:thumbsup:
fun...

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128006323_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128006323_large.jpg)

race car

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128018350_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128018350_large.jpg)

race car

[tarrzan]

very, very nice so far man!! I see this in a 'Mad Max' race or something!! good luck

[Falcorr]

Interesting stuff. Im glad you showed were you took the engines from :)
Enviroment lighting looks good.

What else are you planning on doing?

[Silveraxe]

alev efekti bayaa basarili olmus tebrikler


i really like the flames! :)

[ustuminki]

emrah elmaslı.............tahnk u (and thanks for ur help about the memebership and tablet)
ayıp ettin :thumbsup:

Michael vd Bosch........thanks :cool:

anil..........................thanks(it is all i can do with my supplies,if i find some more iron or old cars, it may get better.. :p

alex ruiz....................thanks i guess i have to find some oil panit and paint my cars (but there is no oil paint in my world ;)

Juha Kämäräinen........i am gonna design the cars and we'll see what they can do... :cool:

yasemin baran...........teşekkürler(thanks)

çeviri için sinem başaa teşekkür..

[anilduran]

kazim it seems really dimensional at the moment...
very good man go on ...

[ustuminki]

bi de ingilizcem olsa bayaa ii olcak tı ama işleri yollarken bile kısa yazıyorum
:cry:

[Agent-Orange]

Kazım Doku,

That is definitly a Wicked ride!!:thumbsup:

Keep at it

[Ducklator]

really nice concept:scream: if you add movement or dinamism would be better:thumbsup:

[walrus]

really great vehicle design!I look forward to seeing how you incorporate it into a final image. Good luck!

-mike

[Randis]

Yes, it looks cool! I like the design
You have a spectacular vehicle, now it would be cool to see this vehicle perform something spectacular (stunt)
Good luck!

[Korline]

wow, dude that's is awsome design, how you gonna put this in the whole pic?
anyhow that's mind blowing :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128081840_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128081840_large.jpg)

the machine for making vehicle

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128097439_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128097439_large.jpg)

(mosquito)...the vehicle which fills up the fuel

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128101649_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1128101649_large.jpg)

the car

[MDN67]

Wonderfull vehicule, your sketch is a coloring wip:eek:, very good work

[rawgon]

Oh! beautifull colors & design, the image have a tremendous quallity, keep up:scream:

[Ranath]

:deal:

omg what a bike

[Vectorius]

Very goos quality Kazim!! that's awesome!! :thumbsup: feep goin'on that really freaky!!! goooooooooooooood luck!! see yaaaaaaa:scream:

[ustuminki]

Shall i show my bike in garage or in race?Which one? :love:
Garage:First moment of engine start :hmm:
Race:Spectacular race scene :banghead:

[ahbeejieh]

Cool render. Just some crits on the design though: that cockpit thing in the middle kinda makes this thing look, I dont know, slow. And the boosters... Wont that slow down the car even more if it's pointing down like that? Just some thoughts man.

Id definitely go with a race scene man.

[angwafalmar]

This is cool! I like the textures and reflections very much. This image has a nice feel. Good luck!

[BaronImpossible]

Concept sketch? That bike's better than my finished images. One thing, make the cockpit more slanted, to make it look meaner :twisted: and faster.

[Goul]

Yeah, freaky bike man, love it. :thumbsup:

I think a race will be more spectacular, but it's up to you to decide ;)
Good luck

[Atris]

Hi! Very good imagination! I like your exceptional design! Good luck!http://forums.cgsociety.org/images/icons/icon7.gif

[ustuminki]

When i show you the race pist it's reason would be understood...
Because race is not over the bridge,its under the bridge.(this
will show it's spectacularity).People will watch the race
with laying down.




İ tried to give energy of contrast :scream:

[MikeYork]

That racer looks awesome, so are u gonna put it into a scene or just leave it like that ??

[Alfadir]

Kazım baba sen çok yaşa.Helal ulan süper olmuş eline sağlık.Koral ben.
Başarılar kardeşim.

[ustuminki]

eywallah umarım bitiririm buraya da soktum araba olayını...... :shrug:

[ustuminki]

Mike York......yes i'll add. I'm thinging on it. I'm going to add when the sketches will be done... :thumbsup:

[MasonRoberts]

I LOVE THAT CAR SOOO MUCH!!! Where can I get one!:)

[Agent-Orange]

I would love to learn some of your skill :thumbsup:

[MasonRoberts]

I second that!:thumbsup:

[ustuminki]

Mason Roberts... thanks...there is the only one... :cool:

James Bryson........graphic designer and amateur car designer

[ustuminki]

Mason Roberts... thanks...it is the only one...:cool:

James Bryson........graphic designer and amateur car designer


çeviri için sinem başaa teşekkür

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1129064379_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1129064379_large.jpg)

line art

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1131722052_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1131722052_large.jpg)

car scrap

[yumurcak]

Hello brother,i saw your tripod bike design before a few weeks,it was very successful.and environment design will be very interesting i think!!go on it is very good:))

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132052073_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132052073_large.jpg)

on future, where cars doesn't drives on the ground,just in the time of teleportation... restarting of collected cars which are put togethered from junk yards...

[rawwad]

Hey man! Back in game, I love composition and style. Keep working! :)

[ustuminki]

yumurcak....thanks

rawwad.......thanks

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132186664_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132186664_large.jpg)

detail from the concept painting

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132458185_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132458185_large.jpg)

I m paiting:)

[ustuminki]

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Would you prefer the colors remaining the same or shall i change it with a blue light?

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132693268_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132693268_large.jpg)

I turn light :))

[Adrianna]

Wow

Best I have seen by far, nice work, can't wait to see the next stage

[ustuminki]

i am also curious about the outcome...i am thinking of put a race track and a few race cars :shrug: in the backround... i will soon be presenting it for your opinions ;)


çeviri için zeynep'e teşekkür..

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132759750_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132759750_large.jpg)

the raceway which is background of work

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132810162_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1132810162_large.jpg)

under bridge raceing...

[ustuminki]

the person who makes a mistake in competition, fly down and die. even, I wonder if I show someones accident. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:



::the person who makes a mistake in competition, fly down and die. even, I wonder if I show someones accident.

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133006209_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133006209_large.jpg)

i m paiting:)

[rawwad]

Great coloring! I like it very much, look fantastic! :)

[SquishMe]

Wow fantastic. Very original picture and very nicley painted.
That trike is very cool. I want it ;)
I had a trike (http://www.ifi.unizh.ch/ailab/people/thomas/images/me/baby2.jpg), but I had to sell it when I came to Japan :cry:

[yumurcak]

Your work is getting more spectacular day by day.The concept is successfull,drawings are successfull,it is getting more fantastic.go on and good luck!

[ustuminki]

thanks everyone..)) :thumbsup:

[ustuminki]

i will add detailed near view,flyingcars and electricity wires. :wise:

rawwad: i saw your machine ,these ara my machine's proerties::
intel celeron 400mhz
64 mb ram
16mb vodoo
30 gb harddisk
cd writer :cry: :cry: :cry:


i haven't gat graphic tablet :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

[bakanekonei]

nice picture and composition! i'm not sure whats going on with the car in front, and some so far behind, whether or not you are going to oput a car between the 2 groups. but i think it'd be cool if you put in some lights along the track.

[anilduran]

kazim it's really so impressive enviroment and seems so deeply, atmosphere is really succesful...
go on bro...

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133152184_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133152184_large.jpg)


im thinking of adding flying cars...im especially thinking of putting lights on the bridge..
.there is not a single race...everyone is racing between themselves in different categories
..((this is not a real track it is a ruined one from a factory))
i tried to show the track in the image..

[ustuminki]

thanks bakanekonei i tried to explain that through the image


thanks anilduran

çeviri için zeynepe teşekkür..

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133189435_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133189435_large.jpg)

i m paiting:))

[zpapageo]

Excellent work! I love the environment. Nice gritty textures and the background buildings are great.

[ustuminki]

thanks zpapageo :p

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133251160_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133251160_large.jpg)

i m paiting(singboard, fire efect, light)

[maurodelia]

Great scenario. i think you could add some more cast shadown.

[yumurcak]

Excellent Excellent work! But i have an advice :where are the spectators,you can add(if you want)
Painting and textures are excellent .very successfull:applause:

[Korline]

wow, not this is the eye candy,
awsome detail, awsome light, no critics :bounce: :bounce:
cheers :cool:

[ustuminki]

thanks everyone (i paiting) :arteest: (ligth,shadow,more detail)

[EricClaeys]

The dramatic perspective really draws in your attention. The dark edge of the exhaust flames seems a little strange - perhaps some more heat-distortion or mirage-like effect instead. Also, the explosion on the bridge seems a little too sublte and I didn't get the raceway right away. I like the look of the image though, keep up the good work!

[yumurcak]

flame efect can be more successful..go on


patlamayı daha ii yaparasan ii olur ...

[ustuminki]

EricClaeys.yumurcak .thanksss..i am going to edit all work,especially light and flame effects :)

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133425481_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133425481_large.jpg)

i m paiting

[weedlog]

Very good work. Great design of vehicle. Very realistic style. Like the picture very much.

[ustuminki]

thanks weedlog :beer:


i can broaden the field of the project for the road to look better... and i am going to add a petrol station on the right


çeviri için zeynep e teşekkür

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133455955_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133455955_large.jpg)

i enlarged the point of view for better understanding, i hope it became more good(if i have enough time i will draw more detail)
çeviri için orhuna teşekür

[Alfadir]

I cant belive that u made this images with a bloody roller mouse.

Roll em all.

My vote is yours.(yürrrrrü beaaaaaa)

[ustuminki]

thanks Alfadir... :beer:

[Norberg]

Hi Kazim, This is looking really good, love your colors and the background is super.
I think the comp is a little off balance though. Everything that´s going on is on the right half.
I would suggest that you either crop it heavily so just half of the left construction shows or make a hole in the construction to the left so the background and part of the racetrack shows even there. Ofcourse that´s just my opinion and I realize that I´m late with these suggestions.
I really like your image, good luck

[ustuminki]

yess,good opinion,i can realize this so:i will crop from left side very little and i will show some holes and cavity parts for showing outside and it is because of this place was a factory,and if i give weight to left side i can get balance between two side.thanks for your suggestion

[beelow]

Nice image, it is coming along very nicely, good luck dude!;)

[ustuminki]

thanks beelow :)

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133724223_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133724223_large.jpg)

general coloring...

[ustuminki]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133883843_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/10/9141/9141_1133883843_large.jpg)

time:the cars which are goes on the ground and the place which is not used flamable
fuel.because of this fuel is cheap.

place:an old factory which is abandoned.dusty atmosphere(life units are on the upper
surface because of this dusts are collecting o down surface)
natural life source and artificial light source and giant lightings.

purpose:transforming an unused factory to a raceway.this is the place where Racers,
designers and engineers comes together and builds ground
cars and the place where they race.

result:regeneration of dead factory.Especially the vehicle which is in front of and
made from scrap and finished and the spectacular feeling because of
first work.

[Alfadir]

Your last image lookin pretty fine brother.Good luck!

[ustuminki]

thanks Alfadir

[Vectorius]

Good luck Kazim and congratulation for your beautiful picture.:thumbsup:

[ustuminki]

thanks Fiolka Alexandre:beer:

[Korline]

detail to perfection, :buttrock: :bounce:
it's awsome, good luck :thumbsup: :D

[ustuminki]

:twisted: thanks Korline:beer:

[ustuminki]

:deal: it was hard to do design with mouse in fact i was afraid of unfinishing my work but finally i finished and i am happy.maybe if i have a graphic tablet it could be better,i hope on future i will join other competitions with graphic tablet.and extra gaddet :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

[Atris]

Hi! I really like your work! The excellent colors! And very great design! Congratulations on a job very well done! I wish you good luck in the next stage! :)

[tuck]

I love your style really original and beautiful!
Congratulations for finish.
Good luck:thumbsup:

[zpapageo]

Hey, Kazim, congratulations on finishing a great work. I love the design and the color. good luck in the judging

[ustuminki]

Atris...... thanks...
tuck......thanks...
zpapageo.....thanks...
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[PSych]

Hi Kazim!

Congratulations... that's really awesome concept:buttrock:
(You did it using mouse?!! - That's spectacular :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
Best of luck on the finals

[ustuminki]

hi PSych..thanks :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[Lync]

:deal: it was hard to do design with mouse in fact i was afraid of unfinishing my work but finally i finished and i am happy.maybe if i have a graphic tablet it could be better,i hope on future i will join other competitions with graphic tablet.and extra gaddet :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

yes, I hear you... I had to do my entry without a graphic's tablet as well and it is painful...literally. The hand cramps up and you can't achieve the lines you want to achieve. You did an exceptional job without a tablet though. Great work! Congratulations for finishing and good luck.

[ustuminki]

thanks lync :beer:

[yumurcak]

goood work bro. goooood luck:thumbsup:

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