++ Breath Of Inspiration: Björk ++, Marla Gothe (2D)

[Self-Designer]

Hey, I like your illustration. In 1st glance it looked really nice, and yeh, bjork rocks :thumbsup:
In 2nd glance I do find some things to critic about:

Maybe it's my own taste, maybe it's a universal rule :p but some of the strokes looks over-done or out-of-content. Those strokes in the left upper corner (aprox. where bjorks look at) look like you've just played with ready-made brushes (I'm aware that the other strokes may be ready-made that came with corel as well, it's ok if it looks appropriate), not even knowing in what direction to stroke them. Maybe you did feel you need to fill that area with details, but I think it's not the right thing you needed.
Another thing is about the background. Somehow it looks framed... the stains look too horizontal and vertical around the subject - not entering behind it, not touching the edges of the picture...

Anyway, those 2 critics are only being picky, yet that's the way for perfection ;) Keep on the good work :)

[BlackBastet]

She's very pretty here.
I love combination with white-black and color.

[Basho]

I really love this illustration. The simplicity of Bjork with the complexity of the designs around her is absolutely fantastic. I realize that a lot of that goes without saying but this is just a great picture!

[Marla Gothe]

Artist 3D
Thanks for constructive critique =)
BlackBastet, Basho
Thank U =)

[Ducklator]

nice image....:) I like the colors..

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