Human Male Highpoly, Trying for realism

[DanVL]

excellent work so far! Pointy nose makes me think of Michael Jackson ;)

[cg_crazy]

very good! you probably already noticed this, but the heels on your model look swollen.
let's see some wires :D

[Scithious]

i only see 2 things wrong which were already mentioned, fix the heels, and make the point of the nose rounder

[Disney]

I know you have only just started on the legs but there seems to be something not quite right with thier proportion in my mind. I think they are little short.

Post a wire please. ;)

[MarciahL]

Thanx for all the c&c.. ill work some moore on him tomorrow, and maybe some tonight

[BlueNyte]

Great stuff. Could you please post a wire frame pic? Also I love the muscle anatomy, but the lower back looks kinda messy. Can't wait to see more.

[EricLyman]

I second the wireframe request! In addition to the other comments that have already been made: His pecs seem somewhat squarish to me, also there seems to be some odd lumps on the small of his back. Otherwise proportions are looking pretty good from what I can see. Great job on the ear.

[silentsamurai]

along with the heels, the knee joints look a little odd and the head, (and this may be more of an asthetic thing), the head looks a little too wrinkled, it should look a little smoother.

[MarciahL]

Thanx again for all c&c, Im really busy with school. Ill paste you guys a wire later, along with some updates on legs, and I have fixed the nose. :)

Ill try to fix every c&c, unless I dissagree.. :P

I also noticed the back when I posted the pictures, ill see what I can do.

[FabioMSilva]

really good.

critic: back of the head too bumpy

:thumbsup:

[MarciahL]

Hi all, here is a small update. tried to fix up in all the c&c I got from you guys.. :)
And as requested, a wireframe.. :) pls keep up the good c&c.. I havent had to much time to work on him, but Ill try to work some moore tonight..

Have also tried to define the legs moore.


http://www.storedyret.com/iB_html/uploads/post-5-09154-bodyupdatewire2.jpg



http://www.storedyret.com/iB_html/uploads/post-5-09134-bodyupdatewire.jpg

[simonenastasi]

Hi,
nice model. There is something wrong with the feet, the back part (is it called toe?): way too big. my 2 €c

[cg_crazy]

It's looking better! Do you have a refrence for the feet? maybe you should try stahlberg's foot tutorial at http://www.3d.sk/tutorials/Modeling_a_foot_in_Maya.htm

post close-ups of the feet please, we could help you out more

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