Spectacular 2D Entry: Henryca Citra

[henryzjetsam]

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before i start, first i have to notice that english is not my first language. and here is my sketch and finally i have some idea, about the children dream, that all children gathering in their dream at midnight while they all still sleeping, so they met inside their dream flying to the castle-something like disneyland- the castle is on the moon. and they have a great fun moment inside every year, the dream happening every year, for all children around the world in a dream.

[henryzjetsam]

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before i start, first i have to notice that english is not my first language. and here is my sketch and finally i have some idea, about the children dream, that all children gathering in their dream at midnight while they all still sleeping every year, so they met inside their dream flying to the castle-something like disneyland- the castle is on the moon. and they have a great fun moment inside every year, the dream happening every year, for all children around the world can met inside a dream.

[henryzjetsam]

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and here is my wip colouring. comment n critic please. :)

[henryzjetsam]

ups..this is my first challenge so a bit confuse though this, i will submit my concept sketch later. sorry friend. can't wait to read the next reply. hahahah..

[Atris]

Hi! Your idea is beautiful! Even it seems to me that it may be the truth! :) Good luck!

[henryzjetsam]

hi..thx my friend! keep rockin dude

[henryzjetsam]

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hello. guys, this is my final coloring, still in progress, hope this one will be the final color that i like, cant wait to see the critc n comment from others. i'll wait, :) respect.

[authentic]

I like this picture that's great. Love the composition.
I would say, to crit a little, that the image can be larger; There 's now ay to breathe. Maybe we can have seen the whole castle.
Another thing is that I don't understand what is the blue box at the top left.

The idea is great.

congratulations.

[Xillion]

Really nice entry!

[ori@r.a.m]

great start, really nice one. with some more details it will awesome. good luck :thumbsup:

[henryzjetsam]

first of all thx for the replying. hahahah.
authentic: hello authentic, thx for the crits, that's why i want to show the whole castle upon the moon. but it will be great if i enlarge the castle. mmm.. the blue box is the bed of the child. so later i'm gonna add some more bed floating upon there. thx again. :bounce:

xillion : ollaa thx mate. :)

ori@r.a.m : helo ori thx man. :)

[cyberarts]

I really like your concept! It is beautiful.

Good Luck!:thumbsup:

[henryzjetsam]

thx for the admire cyberarts. :)

[fal$eProfit]

Great job:thumbsup:

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