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FerdiWillemse
09-23-2005, 06:32 PM
Hey all,

I've been practicing low poly characters the last week, and this is what I'm making right now. I've just finished the basics of the leg, so that's far from being done. She will also get boots and a thong that goes under her belt. Right now I think the belt is too low because it makes her legs look short, while they're not.

c&c are welcome!

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/959/wip33zh.jpg

nibbuls
09-24-2005, 06:21 AM
Keep working on that anatomy... especially for the leg and arms. I assume the foot is just a rough draft.

*thumbs up*

Panupat
09-24-2005, 07:02 AM
female hip is wider than shoulder :)

Pesky
09-24-2005, 08:31 AM
Yes, I agree with you about the belt, I think it's too low (and it does make her legs look too short). However, I also think there's a problem with her arms, in the side view they look fine, but in the front view they look too long (I think it's because they're being held out away from the body).

I had this problem too. My solution was to model the arms seperately (just the arms, not the shoulders) with them hanging straight down (the elbows should line up with the waist and the wrists should line up with the top of the pubic bone, a couple of inches above the crotch line *see image*). I then rotated them into position when I'd finished.

Panupat is right too, the shoulders need to be narrowed or the hips widened a bit. I donít think it would hurt to raise the breasts a little bit also.

There, other than those minor things, I think the model is very good.

Cheers



http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/612/anete036pd.th.jpg (http://img378.imageshack.us/my.php?image=anete036pd.jpg)

xX_eXiGe_Xx
09-24-2005, 09:29 AM
Looks awsome but needs some anatomy changes in my opinion.

FerdiWillemse
09-24-2005, 09:56 AM
Thanks for the c&c everybody! I really appreciate it and it will definently help me!

Pesky: I think I will narrow the shoulders a little and widen the hips a little. You're definently right about that. Right now she look a bit manly with these wide shoulders/small hips. And thanks for the tip of modeling the arms straight down first, I think I'll do that. Right now I think the arms are indeed about 10 cm too long.

Nibbuls: yeah the foot is a small draft, I just made some basic stuff there. Eventually the lower legs will have boots.

Marsfyre
09-24-2005, 10:02 AM
looks good so far. I agree with others on the anatomy. I like the small detail of the cross necklace and the way the belt hangs around the waist is cool. :)

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