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RobertoOrtiz
09-23-2005, 04:12 PM
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b216/robertoortiz1/cgtalk/postersmall.jpg

I am working on an animation based on the poster I did for an internal "commercial". I need to jazz it up a bit more and i would love to hear your input.

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-R

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-R
RobertoOrtiz
09-23-2005, 04:24 PM
Ok I got some private input and I updated the image...
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b216/robertoortiz1/cgtalk/posterlayers5552.jpg

Would love to hear more comments.


-R
Rebeccak
09-23-2005, 04:33 PM
The "Hispanic Countries" text overlap with the bkgrd bugs me a bit...as does the "To" at the top of the poster. I recommend just playing with a bunch of format options and arrangements, and seeing which you like best.

Cheers,

~Rebeccak
novajohnb
09-23-2005, 05:31 PM
Hi Robert,

This is John (novajohnb on here) from the Siggraph group. We met at the last meeting briefly and talked about the (now dead) Sketchwalk thread. I would like to offer some thoughts on your animation.

The fly-in intro close-up on Spain is good. maybe pull back on just the map at first to show the "from Spain to North America" theme a bit more before introducing the ship image into the scene.

The wake behind the ship has a South Park/Monty Python style feel to it. Maybe something with little more flow and little less chunkiness (like the banners on top of the ship) would give it more of a feeling of the ship in motion.

Just a couple of suggestions.

John B
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