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ArtistEd
11-08-2002, 03:52 PM
An image I created using LW. I'm an ancient guy LOL(53) and decided to take up a new hobby a few years ago, but now I would like to work in the industry and wonder what you guys think.

Thanks,
Ed

LordShaitan
11-08-2002, 04:07 PM
looking good, goatie looks great. I cant put my finger on it but something is off. Maybe a color or simply that its not a 3/4 view in an action. Try not to dull down a great model by using a boring pose. But other then that it looks great.

danylyon
11-08-2002, 05:03 PM
Wow.. excellent work on the model and the hair.. looks very nice..

The only thing where you could improove this piece a lot is the lightning.. it's very boring and flat.. this way.

iNFERNiS
11-08-2002, 06:13 PM
nice pimp! :D

Model looks great!

JA-forreal
11-08-2002, 08:19 PM
Man you set this one up right.

Give him a "lean" like Superfly. Set him up with a caddy circa 1972 composited over a real 1970's Brooklyn street scene background.






JA-forreal

gmask
11-08-2002, 08:25 PM
Where's all his sweet sweet bitches ? :cool:

typeA
11-08-2002, 09:04 PM
is that don majic whon from that american pims movie?

Zastrozzi
11-08-2002, 11:19 PM
love the face and but i think the rest of the cusstume specificaly the jacket and shirt need to have more work done on the textures cause they look very cg maybe a more cloth like bump?
other than that nice work

malfunkshun
11-09-2002, 01:37 AM
is it just me or is one side of the face (gasp) actually not quite exactly like the other? good job

ArtistEd
11-09-2002, 03:53 AM
I would like to thank everyone for their comments. The critiques I found to be very helpful, as sometimes you can get to the point where you can't see the forest for the trees. I will definitely make the changes needed and post again with the changes when I can. That way you can see how your input has helped me.

I, of course, truly enjoy the positive comments as well, as they encourage me to keep on going, as there are times when you can wonder if it's worth pursuing at all, if you know what I mean.

This was not intended to look like anyone or even a pimp for that matter, but, I guess he sure does look like one.

Thanks a lot,

Ed

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