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[botho81]

http://pc23.gd.fh-mannheim.de/%7Ebotho/images/has_06.jpg

here's almost the last step.
only the person is getting way more detail, beacuse he is the main part of the picture !
any comments are welcome.

[ajay1589]

definetly deserve comments....nice choice of colors

for some reason i liked the railing there better

[botho81]

thanx, in the next step i reworked the complete citystructures and the person. coming tonight.

[botho81]

here's another one. flipped it horizontally. i think it is leading the eye better. still no detail in the persons torso and face. what can i do better ? comments welcome.
greetings

http://pc23.gd.fh-mannheim.de/%7Ebotho/images/has_07.jpg

[johanflood]

maybe you should keep it more sharp in the sketch stage even if you want a foggy style in the end result. I mean it is more easy to get details right in that way. At least that is my experience.

[botho81]

ok, i would say, this is almost the final painting !
comments welcome.

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b101/botho81/has_08.jpg

[botho81]

puh !! i now replaced the whole figure to set it nearer the impact.
the picture before was to static. i reduced the texture on the wall and
some details are missing e. g. the left hand.
so don't mind at the time. crits welcome !!

http://pc23.gd.fh-mannheim.de/%7Ebotho/images/has_09.jpg

[Matellis]

This is looking really nice , LOVE the back ground , but you want crits so here they come

1- the grates on the wall above his head seem to be not with the prospective you have going on. So maybe you can make those with your perspective lines you are using.
2- The way his left hand is doesnt seem like a normal pose for someone in that position , it seems to far away from his body. i would say bring that closer to his body and get a more dramatic pose.
3- with how you have the gun shot hitting the wall and how you can see the indend from it with that perspective , more of the particals from the building should be going toward the camera since it taking a chunk out right at the corner .
4- something about the wall that he is leaning against , you shouldnt be able to see the deffinition of the bricks when the bricks are so dark like that , maybe faintly but not as much as what you have.

Thats all I can see so far , But I really like where this painting is going so I want to help you make it as good as it can be. I'm no master painter but I hope this helps you.

[BlueNyte]

Hey I like what you got started here. This will be great when you finish it. The only thing I see that you might want to change or alter is that the head might be a little tiny (not so much in width, but in heighth). Keep up the good work, and I'd like to see more.

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